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Check in by: 08-15-04 at 01:31 AM

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BANG has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 01:32 AM.

Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 01:53 AM.

So. Killa kali huh? fuckin joke this nigga from San Fran. Dont worry im just talkin shit ill get to spittin in a sec.

If you talkin shitnigga just keep going- cus trust me
nigga i'ma keep going till its nothing so nigga quit frontin/ when you see me coming nigga skip running - lay ya ass down and start screamin/ cops questioning?- Man He was dead b4 i seen him/Just leave it at that man ask no question about it- niggas like you probably think they bout it bout it/but i can tell by ya flow that I got ya mind clowded/ I got you on the age factor so respect elder/ I aint fuckin wit you i just thought I'd tell ya-
you battle like ya life - you just a failure

im four years younger and you still cant rile me*
the only way you 'BANG' is to use yo head like a smiley
its useless for us to battle, dont believe me, check the wins
ive knocked out niggas better than you, and they were 12 year old kids!
your flows a drunk truck driver, no style, no grace
you such a damn 'herb' my mom puts you in soups for taste
matter of fact, your 19 and still livin with your parents
couldnt get pussy, so asked your mom if she was up for double marriage

*im 15, hes 19

up . . . .

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Voted For: BANG

yo i was feelin Bangs flow on this one. it was like he was talkin to him. Phantom took the easy way to try to diss Bang so his punches was mad weak.

Vote goes to BAng

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Bdddddat lame cats get hit the fuck up so if you wanna talk get the fuck up and breathe easy.

Voted For: BANG

Bang Took This One .> Both Verses Were not good to the what i expected .. Bang Had better verse the connected more .. so Vote : Bang
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Voted For: Phantom

I can't vote cuz im in ya crew but this was pretty good, the punchlines were ok, structure was fine,your vocab can use lil bit elevating but its kool, some rhymes didnt work that well but that kool...His structure was wack, i like ur smiley line...keep going strong fam...

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damnit, dont worry, i'll pm strobe to delete tha vote, cuz its crew vote...


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Voted For: Phantom

Damn, ending was sick, if there is one thing Phantom does the best, it's ending a battle wit a killer line, i'll tell you right now that phantom had the best line of the battle with that ending sick, and he got practicly everything else on you bang, he just came hard and you came more in a lacadaisical fashion so ima have to give it to phantom, word

Voted For: Phantom

u got my vote cause ur punches came harder and i liked some of ur lines Closer was good Opener was decent


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Voted For: Phantom

ok:
bang:ya verse was ok overall, structure was off, made it hard to follow, wich in turn messed with ya flow a bit, so i would say to just work on that, but punches were ok,
phantom:ya verse was good, you had good punches, some were funny,the herb line and the opener with the smiley, ya flow and strucure were good too, nice job
votehantom

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