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Old 09-01-04, 08:34 AM   #1
Daz
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I've been around for the Ride, Old RB Head! Thats me..
D/R's rode me, like a fucking Taxi..
Face Facts See...@ RB we do Shit Correct...
And the fuck ups here...Hmm..Leaves even Strobe With Regrets..
And its not that i dont like you..Really its not kid..
Its that you have a talent dip, While we have a boiling pot kid..
And yes we are better than you..No one doubts that..
Shit we took the skill in the breakup..and that was a whileback..
I mean we have our assholes,Wack heads, and ego's...
But half this fucking site is one big freepost...
Yet me writing this is not a way to boast..
But how many fucking times Do i get Pm'd here for votes?..
Call me what you like...hater, fag herb or punk..
But in the end..Your The ones that WE DIDNT WANT...
I mean the people i hate from here..are the people i hated there..
and if there here dope wack there...where did this skill appear..
see the problem is so many kids want a restart..
So we can sweetalk them.."you fucking suck..sweetheart"
Sites full of retarts..and with that intervention..
Ill mention..that we're better down to the Battling Engine..
and if you dont believe that your just wack holmes...
Click The RB link..and take your ass back home..

Word.

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Old 09-01-04, 12:34 PM   #2
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this was actually pretty decent. Nice flow & just pretty witty. Are u that faggot that was talkin on AIM to me with COM?
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Old 09-01-04, 02:16 PM   #3
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Damn this was nice, flow was there, imagery was there nice drop man.....
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Old 09-01-04, 07:06 PM   #4
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this was actually pretty decent. Nice flow & just pretty witty. Are u that faggot that was talkin on AIM to me with COM?

Faggot?
Pfft Not Me
Who Are You Kid?
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Old 09-01-04, 07:26 PM   #5
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nice shit...
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Old 09-02-04, 12:17 AM   #6
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Up.
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Old 09-02-04, 12:22 AM   #7
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I mean we have our assholes,Wack heads, and ego's...
But half this fucking site is one big freepost...


that was gangsta
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Old 09-02-04, 12:25 AM   #8
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Nice piece to read actually...you had good emotion in some parts...but the thing that got me was the topic...lol...knowing you could get bitched at..but it's coo...overall nothing much to dislike...but good overall...here's my favorite part...

Quote:
Originally Posted by Best Part Of Daz's Verse
And yes we are better than you..No one doubts that..
Shit we took the skill in the breakup..and that was a whileback..
I mean we have our assholes,Wack heads, and ego's...
But half this fucking site is one big freepost...
Yet me writing this is not a way to boast..
But how many fucking times Do i get Pm'd here for votes?..
Call me what you like...hater, fag herb or punk..
But in the end..Your The ones that WE DIDNT WANT...
I mean the people i hate from here..are the people i hated there..
and if there here dope wack there...where did this skill appear..
^Truest and best flowing part of your verse...no doubt you didnt have to think too hard for this verse...but the rhymes were good..and flow was nice....


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Flow - Very Good
Emotion - Good
Concept - Very Good
Vocabulary - Good
Overall:
Nice read...good topic no doubt...lol.....nothing else to really say that I haven't already said I suppose....


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Rating:
7.5/10
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Old 09-02-04, 12:28 AM   #9
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Ha..Word Up.

Ugh Ping
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Best Record: $25 and 5 votes next season
Best Verse: $25 and 5 votes next season


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Old 09-02-04, 12:06 PM   #10
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that was nice shit keep doin ur thing
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Old 09-02-04, 05:54 PM   #11
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..Why do i get one line Feedback..
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3rd Place: $25 and 5 votes next season
Best Record: $25 and 5 votes next season
Best Verse: $25 and 5 votes next season


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