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Check in by: 09-07-04 at 06:43 AM

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illuson has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 05:44 AM.

keen2B has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 05:45 AM.

right now im under no ILLUSON.
i thought my record was bad
but its clear u need a brain TRANSFUSION.
u need to give up now
to end all CONFUSSION.
ur record is quite AMUSION
by now ur used to LOSSE'n
il take this battle to end
my own record ABUSIO'N.

you've lost nine because of ur infior RYMHE.
iv lost mine because im drunk all the TIME.
i come at wak rappers wit a tipsy LINE.
im ok now and im ready to SHINE.
il LIGHT up ur ass wit my my left over
alcholic 9% WINE.
no need for u to WHINE
ok it will b a little SORE
but its better than being washed up dead on a SHORE
NINE miles from civilisation
NINE dagger wounds found in ur HEAD
NINE's ur unlucky number
like a cat after NINE lines you'll Be DEAD

i only know you as phony
fight me like ya told me
we'll never be homie
i'm gonna beat ya all by my lonley
self
i dont need no help
try to expose me
ya way to nozey
stay out of my shit
this so called g gonna hit him self
dont fuck with me
cause ya aint m.c
im far from whack
got all these all ove my sack
keen 2 b got queers
gets his gear half price at sears
bang bang all this bitch'll hear
we gonna go face to face
throw ya down a stair case
give ya some head spacedie mother fucker
ya fuckin dick sucker
ive elavted
its been stated
im blessin the mic
no m.cs insight
im gonna sho yall who keen2b
is not what he seen2b
drop the mic ya don b
ya cant see me

how yall like me now

up'in for votes
get at me
look'in for the win

peace..

ya can be lookin all ya want dont mean yall get it

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Voted For: keen2B

ok no good punches or disses vocab was better for keen as well as flow and structure so he wins on the only things i can vote on

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Voted For: keen2B

Aight....

Not The Strongest Battle In The World..

KEEN You Got The Vote, Ya Personals Hit Harder, Ya Vocab Was Okay, But You Need'a Step Ya Game Up, Add Humour To Ya Punches, Try Usin Your Words Better Too....But Okay Drop 5/10....

illuson....Ya Rhyme Seem'd Kinda Elementary (No Disrespect)

You Need'a Up Your Vocab An Your Punches, But Nice Structure An Some Okay Wordplay On There...

Both Need To Elevate....

KEEN Gets My Vote

Return The Favor n Vote On My Battles

P E A C E

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shoutout boy i got ur back
cos u got mine
il continue to elevate my inferior rymhe

peace

Voted For: keen2B

nice lines... punchlines are good
"like a cat after NINE lines you'll Be DEAD"
nice use of word play... not bad for a drunk

i give you this vote on structure alone
i would like to here it spoken... the flow is quite understandable

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ya thanxs tanto looken for the first win u no
like i said im sober today though ha

Voted For: keen2B

WACK BATTLE
keen2
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

illuson
Punches were good too not as hard as keen2B's tho...
Structure was good..
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...

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