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6 - Lines
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-11-04 at 02:27 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

*+*yung blood*+* has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 01:59 PM.

Eyvon has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 02:01 PM.

yo yo yo bitch ass rhymeing his wack ryhmes on da show//
basterd fucking his dad all day tit wanker his mam lky a no-no//
hes got some gay record theres no chance hes gonna win//
hes got all his wack ryhems as u call um imma kick him in da bin//
were he belongs hes poor hes mam was ashamed she had the cunt//
lyk i said this muther fucker cant rap hes crap and hes a grunt//

drop yo wack shit dude uppin

Yo some people say I'm whack, now if that's right /
I'm the freshest whack femcee that you ever heard, in your lifetime/
My slick accapella sounds clever with the beats/
Boy I'm the deepest thing since potholes to ever hit the streets/
Forgot a gold digger's succubus , my souls thick with ruggedness/
With the mic I'm like a dyke, can't no man fuck with this/
We elevated to new heights premeditated/
Let it be that I stated they hate it now that they see that I made it/
The escalated can be put to the test of greatness/
Snatch the heart from MC's and I ate it/
So I take it that's the reason I'm hated/
But pimping it, and acting like you could rock a show/
Harder than LL's Rock the Bells, but you is a ho/
Everything that you collaborate I lacerate/
My rhymes they keep coming like nympho maniacs that masturbate/
At a faster rate, yeah I got something for your ass to hate/
I blasterate, and have you all running master gates/
And as for face clutching and touching the flows/
I got them open like marijuana smoke up in your nose/
Bucking these rolls, I got that shit down to a science/
Leaving them hot and bothered, turned on like an appliance/
Defiance, no we won't have that/
You want your shit to blow up?/
Well I'ma stuff some dynamite in your ass crack/
And blast that shit to kingdom come/
Then bring them some of this real hip-hop/
I drop beats and you ain't singing or gonna do a thing about/
And you all knew from Meeko/
That you couldn't hold your own with the strength of Lou Forigno/
So stop that bullshit and flow/
Yo, you need to come with the real skills, and act like you know!

it was longer. shit! i forgot. can u just add lines 2 urs? or am i disqualified?

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o and,i almost forgot, ima girl, yo. fuck that!

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oppps soz
and u sud be d/q
but u can redo ur verse with 6 lines
or get d/qed

up to u
d/q or
redo so it got 6 lines
wots it to be
>>>>>>>>>>>>UPPIN>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

ill redo it. ima just shorten it...... i guess....

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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt

Yo some people say I'm whack, now if that's right /
I'm the freshest whack femcee that you ever heard, in your lifetime/
My slick accapella sounds clever with the beats/
Boy I'm the deepest thing since potholes to ever hit the streets/
Forgot a gold digger's succubus , my souls thick with ruggedness/
With the mic I'm like a dyke, can't no man fuck with this!

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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt

ok go 4 it
good lucky to ya gal
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>uppin<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

so any1 checkin this out right now, vote 4 my new 6lined verse. not the other 1.
UPPIN!

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