Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-16-04 at 06:47 PM

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Raphael has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 09:16 PM.

I'll disconnect Ur neck,wit ma fucking 'crazy' 'punches'...
'Rip' U to 'pieces' and leave U looking like packable lunches...
You couldn't 'spot' me....if I had the fucking chicken pox!
Shit, you couldn't be 'on top of my game' unless U was humpin my Xbox...
I'll b leaving U 'trembling'...and unable to 'ride'...
Fuck wit me and I'll put your record...more on the loss side...
I might be 0-0,but its better than negative 1...
Shit,after U gain this loss and rematch,you wont just get one!(loss)...

Aight,understand the shit,and blah blah blah.

the_crazy_one has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 09:29 AM.

being soft affects performance, in and out of battle, dude><
S'why Angela Devi knows she wants it...just not from you><
Cuz ya always come up short, never once stood tall><
Only Raphael I ever heard of, his rhymes didnt hit at all><
Ya freak family's like ya posts, I bet ya never noticed this><
Mom and Dad are the cartoons who produced a fuckin bitch><
He checked in killing characters, like it's just wasting time><
But what'll really kill HIS character, is his shitty fuckin rhyme><
So I hate a bleeding heart, like I hate going to churches><
They think there's good in everyone till I show em Raphael's verses.><
Nah, just playing, I know you's cool, and in the end><
ill beat you just like im beatin M.C DUCK for his win><

Voted For: the_crazy_one

flow-the_crazy_one, a lot easier to read, and much more put together not stretching one line and making the other a lot shorter so his flow was better

punches-the_crazy_one, had way more punches then raphael, didnt notice any that big in raphaels verse

personals-none, both didnt use any personals on each other

multies-none, none of them used the correct multies and plugged them in to spice up their lines so nobody gets it

vocab-the_crazy_one, better vocab then raphael, raphael seemed like we was just starting, he didnt have much vocab that could have been replaced in some lines, crazyone had better

originality/creativity-the_crazy_one, both had somewhat creativity in some lines but crazy one had much more, raphael only 2 or 3 lines filled with something different,crazy one had lot more of creative things in his verse

overall i vote the_crazy_one, besides the elements i marked none, he won the rest of them over raphael

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Voted For: the_crazy_one

you klled it all with punches creatitive ness and wordplay good job dude Vote/CrazyOne

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Voted For: the_crazy_one

nice battle u 2 but again as i said the crazy 1 wins this 1 better pucnhes n stuff nice verse man ur kindda good the crazy 1 wins this hands down no dout about it
v/ the crazy 1

Voted For: Raphael

v/Raphael.
Crazy_One, your punches weren't that bad, but I don't think they really connected, I also likes Raphaels Xbox joke, so, he gets my vote.

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