yo lets get this popN, UPPN MAYNE

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

Voted For: 20 GraND

Yo aaight............
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Opener-20
Closer-20
Wordplay-20
Punches-20
Multies-Dubs
Personals-Neither
Overall Best Verse-20
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This was a weak battle....but i got to go wit 20 for obious reasons.....dubs-i wasnt feelin your shit and even if i was you would still lose..........but keep elevatin i see real potential in you.......20-nice word play but you can still elevate alot.....the only thing i saw that you were missin was personals yall should go to the tutorials it helps alot.....V/20

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

UppN.. quit being a bitch and reseting that battle... this will be the 3rd time ive murked u now...

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

Uppn, come on this cat keeps disqualifying all votes so explain ight 1

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

Voted For: 20 GraND

Lyrics:20
Opening:20
ending:20
Metas:neither
Multies:neither
Personals:20
Originality:20
Wordplay:20
Punchs:20
as you can see it is 20-grand wit the win

return the favor

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=151021 insane16 (up 2-0)

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149715 Lil-Youngstah (up 2-0)

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Voted For: 20 GraND

yo 20grand killed him with this one i liked it a hell of a lot better it was such a good verse you win this one boy

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yo why was my vote dqed

Voted For: e-dubz

edubz won.. better flow, better punches, i gotta give it to him.. his punches seemed more thought out to me and they were more clever.. some of the shit 20grand said was coo too, but in the long run, edubz had better set ups and punches that landed pretty good, punches win battles, so i gotta give it to edubz.. the flow, structure and all that other shit was a tie, so close battle ya'll, but e wins..

return honest vote right here plz, thanx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=152255

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Voted For: 20 GraND

20grand got this won i like the flow and the battle was something i had 2 think about but 20 grand flow wass better but not by much so i think 20 grand just pulled this one off...
but it;s my opinion

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Voted For: e-dubz

ok e dubz good opener aint devoloped yet good diss there nice punches throughout ender was dope and true as fuck lol good structure nice multis good vocab a around decnt verse here a 8.5/10
20 grand ok opener madd played there was a thread about gun lines and sic lines being the most played on r.v and they are 2nd bar corny and not good at all the coupon punch was dope as fuck ender aint play out right weak there ok structure little streched in places but ok vocab good no multis a 7/10
you both had pretty good verse but e dubz had harder punches and better even though 20 had the hardest punch with that coupon shit that was really his only hard one there plus e had better flow and multis so he gets my vote here

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Voted For: e-dubz

E-dubs...

ima rape this bitch........ and he wont hesitate to recieve it
cuz when im done grand on his knees like hes prayin for jesus
decent...

i suggest throwin in the white flag before you get wrecked
20grand like pictures just takin, he aint even developed yet
ha nice punch....

dubz could ruin the average rap..... from the averge cat
im strapped wit tight sixteens like church shoes on shaq
set up was decent follow up was preety good....

picked apart yo lines, still cant find a punch.. u not perfection
ur flow grimey but inconsistant like tryin to piss wit erections
eeewww... preety good ending not a bad verse all around good... 8.0

next...

Im gonna have to ask you to leave, i know its darastic//
But ur a disease, you make the mother fuckn "class sick"//
ha nice opener/personal...

Battle'N 20 GraND so you can abosrb some of the wealth//
Might as well stick ur dick in ur ass,cuz ur so "full of yourself"//
set up was eeeh even thou i get it, follow up was decent but played concept......

Dub ur shit is "eZ" and you intent is soft//
Your rhymes are like coupons, a high "percentage is off"//
oo.. why i aint think of that one??? good punch...

You couldnt beat me man, if u were the father rhyme//
"watch" kid ur broken, battled me at the wrong "time"/
ending was weak..... u could of end it better then that...

after i read e-dubs verse i thought it was preety good then i read 20 grand verse and i thought half way down that he might have te win then i read the weak ending and was like WHA!!..... u cant be serious.... 1 played concept to go along with it.....

but had one good punch plus 1 good personal *opener*

all u need it was one more.....

preety tight battle N was well worth my read but im a go with e-dubs on this one cue to less-weakness showing in the verse........

Voted For: 20 GraND

iight this was a pretty close battles....here da breakdown

Punches - 20 GRAND...simple because his shyt came alot harder n more direct...he was tryin to get up in u E !...but 20's 1st bar was garbage...where im from SICK means ILL...but if u mean sick like sick wit the flu...WACKKKKK...anyway DUBZ had some punches but they wasnt as hard as 20s !!! simple as that

Personals - 20 GRAND...his first personals was GARBAGE...but
Dub ur shit is "eZ" and you intent is soft//
Your rhymes are like coupons, a high "percentage is off"//
whoa !...some1 got ripped...E didnt put no real personal shyt up in his verse...so 20 grand jus called u a softy son !!!!! cuz ur verse was pretty soft (no beef) but it was

Meta4s - Easily 20 GRAND...
Battle'N 20 GraND so you can abosrb some of the wealth//
Might as well stick ur dick in ur ass,cuz ur so "full of yourself"//
Dub ur shit is "eZ" and you intent is soft//
Your rhymes are like coupons, a high "percentage is off"//... smashmobb on the metas in this battle...yes E did have metas in his verse like da jesus n pictures barz but they just were not hard AT ALL...u gotta come more direct n vicious

Wordplay - tie...both verses were pretty simple n easily read...so nuttin was 2 major wit da wordplay...mostly punches

Enjoyment - once again 20 Grand takes da cake...punches were harder n direct...had some ill metas that also came hard n got alil personal wit it as well...E's verse was aiight but 20 grand just overwhelmed u !


Vote - 20 GRAND !



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Uppn, this is the 4th time this kid reset the scores.. sad

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

nah its sad that ur boys cant explain votes for u..cuz they jus d/r's, tell them to learn how to vote