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09-29-04, 01:52 PM
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Sage in "How to breathe through the disease"
IP: C1B6 770C
Say we live in a cold world that's irrelavant...
seldom it's the cell that fits when im one with my element... I felt it gets a bit fridgit(sp) when im finished with my food for thought brought a new exsistence used my sweat to wash the dishes man i hope you listen matter o fact lend me your ears i'll pay you back plus commission... all i got is my fists its...busy cuffing my testicles what make you think you special get crushed with your pedestal Now walk it off Hop-a-long..no not your name that's how you leaving Sage/Demon...man vs the machine was how he learned to breathe in don't think i was manufacuture how can i say i broke the mold I refuse to believe that God mass-produced my soul So we roll to a conclusion used to my words being hollow see... I blind to the truth you need a leader follow me... blah...if you can't catch the flow i got audios in the sig..wanted to see if i can still do text -replied to NewKid
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 ^I think my Food for thought got me Full of myself...^ The Voice of Reason [Sage's Playlist] Billshut Letter to Katherine Last edited by Simple Sage : 09-30-04 at 06:26 AM. |
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09-30-04, 06:40 AM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
this is good! you have some good rhyme's in it. The flow is str8 forward. But Im gonna go check the audio aswell. nice drop man keep elevating....pz
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09-30-04, 11:27 AM
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IP: C1B6 770C
damn uppin.....
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^I think my Food for thought got me Full of myself...^ The Voice of Reason [Sage's Playlist] Billshut Letter to Katherine |
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09-30-04, 08:31 PM
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IP: BAE0 4B77
this wuz hott, i lyked the rhymes and the shit u put togetha.
Nice Metaphorz, in the 5th and 6th lynez. I think it needs a little more stucture/ but otha than that its hott! Nice jOb. ________ ..sHaIi.. |
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10-01-04, 11:54 AM
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IP: C1B6 770C
hmmm...can i get an up..some returned favors maybe
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^I think my Food for thought got me Full of myself...^ The Voice of Reason [Sage's Playlist] Billshut Letter to Katherine |
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