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5 | 55.56% |
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4 | 44.44% |
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10-04-04, 03:47 PM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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This was feedback posted for Empire
IP: 24A3 0EF0
just checkin how the votin n stuffs goin on my crew members battle......
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10-04-04, 06:48 PM
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#17
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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This was feedback posted for Empire
IP: 3375 4717
checkin this shit out...... crew battle.......................
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10-04-04, 07:35 PM
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"Ill Emcee"
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IP: C4F6 D169
Voted For: Empire
Empire has this one..... I liked his verse ebtter .... his sounded more convincing... i liked it.... he used more emotions and i liked his flwo beter.... Vaqlor you had a pretty good verse ... but i liked empires verse btter.. Peace!! Return tha fava on mah battle \/ \/ \/ |
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10-04-04, 08:46 PM
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"Ill Emcee"
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IP: C4F6 D169
Coninue>>>>> From ^^^^^
Empires vocab was alright .... i liked the variety.... Valor .... your vocab was good too .... you used some pretty nice words.... lol i had to look one of them up... Empire.... you had some good flow... beat valpr in that .... but valor your flow was good ... but i understood emps more... Over all i thot empire had this.... V/ Empire... ^^ as seen.. Peace |
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10-04-04, 09:15 PM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
uppin number 3
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10-06-04, 12:49 AM
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New to RB
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This was feedback posted for VALOR
IP: 9CA0 C805
Vote - Valor
Reason: Pretty good battle....Valor came with better emotion, and imagery than Empire, but Empire had the flow and vocabulary no doubt.....BUT this is a topical battle...so the way I see it..is you have to be on topic...therefore Valor got this for telling an emotional story with good thoughts and concepts.....and imagery...Empire had a good story...but it wasn't really vivid...it seemed cloudy in some areas and not really too emotional.....which is why Valor won in my opinion....not a bad read from both... |
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10-06-04, 12:55 AM
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New to RB
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IP: 9CA0 C805
Somebody fucking get that polled....goddamn new sites....
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10-06-04, 06:59 PM
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New to RV
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This was feedback posted for Empire
IP: 00FA 9D68
I can not post a vote becuz I dont have 200 post, but here's who I think won and why.Empire won. His rhyme structure was strong, complex, and apparent and he did'nt even use stanzas (which is really cool cause I hate stanza's with a passion). it flowed really well and it seemed very genuine and emotional. Voltors was alright. Return the fav and check out the first time I tried to be a rapper. it's Selah David vs. Certifiedthug/gangsta
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10-06-04, 07:09 PM
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-BTR-
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
Voted For: VALOR
im voting for valor because i felt his more. it looked like empire jus tried to use a lot of big words(which is good) so it seemed better. empire had better vocab but his structure wasnt very good. some of his lines were crowded. valor's was more deep i think and i liked that idea of the prayer at the end |
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10-06-04, 07:12 PM
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This was feedback posted for Empire
IP: A0C8 44A9
checkin tha polls
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10-06-04, 07:12 PM
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STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
ok 2-2 should be 3-3 damn valor this will be close
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10-06-04, 11:34 PM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
upin number 5
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10-07-04, 01:41 AM
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Lyrical Prosperity
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IP: A59C 8706
Voted For: Empire
vote goes to Empire, you take ths battle man!!! flow was nice from both half, but i think over all Empire takes it, it was consistanly good and the structure was nice to! punches deffinatly go to Empire, his punches were hard hitting and funny, valor your piunches werent bad but they didnt hit as hard as Empire. overall, definatly Empire, vote to Empire good battle guys, please return the favour and drop some votes on the battles below, thx Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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10-07-04, 04:43 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: C979 A54F
Voted For: VALOR
i feel that Valor won this battle with more emotion and a more creative peice in my opinion he actually came pretty good in this i was def feelin it so i read it over 2 times pretty good i think. Emire your peice was ok i wasnt really into it to much because your structure made it kind of boring and as well you didnt give as much detail and had less emotional lines, you took the vocab though. decent battle VALOR win with a better peice. V/ VALOR |
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10-07-04, 05:19 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: D1F4 CDDD
Voted For: Empire
Ok... Where to start.. Empire took the battle no doubt.. He made proper poetic connections.. The rhyming was good, he would have benefited from formatting his verse properly. He also had good emotion.. Now.. Valor... Your verse was nothing more then a big dissapointment for me... You talk about being the king of poetry on this site.. But reading this battle verse, I really cant see any reason you would even try to make that claim. Im not hating at all, Im only speaking truth man. Let me tell you why I thought yours was sort of wack poetry. For starters, all you did was tell a story.. There were little to no poetic connections or imagry.. I mean, it was more or less a topical without structure or flow and at times without rhymes.. To put it nicly, it was below average poetry. You need to seriously work on your verbal imagry skills and start reading peices from people like Lyric and, shit, even take notes from empires verse. Because your peice on this battle sucked. And one more thing, the bit where you wrote, *puts his head down and cry's softly* Was really wack.. It had nothing to do with the peice and really.. It made no sense. Please elevate A LOT before you try to tell people you are the king of poetry and that sort of shit again.. And no, Im not hating at all on this, I have no beef with you and I dont want you to get mad cut because of my comments.. I want you to take them as a form of critique and try to improve for next battle. Vote- Empire |
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