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xOverdozEx has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-07-04 04:08 PM.

Qidd MinX has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-07-04 04:24 PM.

Ayo ...
Ya Flows Useless And Meaningless Like The Bibles New Testament/
And My Rhyme Book Is Deeper Than Bible's Chapter Of Genesis/
You Should Be Greatfull, My 9 Thinks Of You With Extra-Lead/
And Your Low Skill Level Flow Reminds Me Of That Of Special-Ed./

Warming Up...
You Wont Get Reconciled, You Know I Got A Better-Style
And You Quick To Get Locked Upon Action Like Pedofiles
I Spit Passionately, So NIgga Dont Come Snappin-At-Me
Even If I'm Whack... The Fact Is You Whacker-Than-Me
Ya Rappin-Is-Weak, You're Gonna Take Some Fatal-Blows
And Then You Can Get Ya Ass Torn Up Like Anal-Hoes!!!
When The Flamal-Throws Your Bitch Ass Is Afraid-To-Bust
While Overdoze Is Here Wit A 9 Turning Ya Brains-To-Mush
And Then Stain-Your-Guts.. Face It... U Aint Close-To-Me
You Destinied To Lose Dawg I Got You Bagged Like Groceries
So Admit It Openly.... You Suck We Got No Alliance,-Ass
Basically Coz Ya Shit Puts Me To Sleep Like Science-Class

Finisher
This QUEER-IS-BRAINLESS Facing Me I'LL Fucking SPEER-HIS-ANUS, So CLEAR-THA-STATIONS Before I Leave You TEARING-SHAMELESS, My EARS-ARE-PATIENT You Just An IRRITATION... The Only Thing That Bothers Me More Is How WEIRD-YA-NAME-IS//

done

16 lines
rushed but i think its ok

If All You Know~The~Truth Then You Realise Im Not~Gunna~Lose/
Accepted That You~Can't~Spit So You Must Have Swallowed~The~Truth/
Hold No Sorrow~For~Losers I'll Render~Ya~Frame With
Dents~In~Ya~Brain/
You Weren't Just Hit With The~Ugly~Stick You Were
Molested~And~Raped/
And Im Tempted~To~Say How Qidd MinX Has A Constant Negative~Way/
The Only Time You Been Positive Was When You Got Tested~For~Aids/
And Ive Yet To Mention~You're~Fake This Faggot Gets
Labled~As~Whack/
These Spineless child Like~Me~Dissing~Him So He Can Be
Taken~Aback/
Then You Can Savour~The~Fact My Weapon~Of~Speech Is A Lesson~For~Free/
If We Placed A Wager~On~The~Battle You Couldnt Get The Better~Of~Me/
Im Flipping~Your~Weak Script ho This Kid Im
Ripping~With~Ease/
If You Excersised Your Skills You Couldn't Make A
Nice~Figure~Of~Speech/
Showing Will Trigger~Defeat Parts Of Your Corpse I'll
Rent~Out~To~Queers/
So When Peeps Say You~Were~Whack You'll Finally Be Lending~An~Ear/
Look Im Acsending~Your~Fear With Every Line That I Say~And~Sail/
Til I Give You Cardiac~Arrests And You're Too Poor To
Make~The~Bail/

uppin for votes i mean cant people take a lil time
out and vote

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Voted For: xOverdozEx

Overdose - good spit man, you had a good flow.. and some creative wordplay.

Best Line - Ya Rappin-Is-Weak, You're Gonna Take Some Fatal-Blows
And Then You Can Get Ya Ass Torn Up Like Anal-Hoes!!!

So Admit It Openly.... You Suck We Got No Alliance,-Ass
Basically Coz Ya Shit Puts Me To Sleep Like Science-Class


Worst Line - This QUEER-IS-BRAINLESS Facing Me I'LL Fucking SPEER-HIS-ANUS .. lol, did he just say that?..

Qudd - iight spit man, your flow was off in some spot, but your lines were iight.

Best Line - Showing Will Trigger~Defeat Parts Of Your Corpse I'll
Rent~Out~To~Queers/
So When Peeps Say You~Were~Whack You'll Finally Be Lending~An~Ear/

Worst Line - If All You Know~The~Truth Then You Realise Im Not~Gunna~Lose/
Accepted That You~Can't~Spit So You Must Have Swallowed~The~Truth/

OVERALL - Good battle, but I gotta give this one to Over, he just came harder wit better multi's and punches. Qudd some of your shit didnt flow to well.. and some didnt rhyme work on that.

VOTE - Overdose

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Fucka E-Style, Its da mothafuckin G-Side

Voted For: xOverdozEx

Flow - over

Punches - both

Personals - over had alot more, and were alot better,

Multies - Obviously over won this (he bad)

Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate

Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses =over

thanx for the votes yall

and gkillaz i wuld vote in the battle but i cant vote till i got 20 posts ill try to post some more and then start voting

lets get some more votes plz... how much is a K.O. 5?

Voted For: xOverdozEx

Ya Flows Useless And Meaningless Like The Bibles New Testament/
And My Rhyme Book Is Deeper Than Bible's Chapter Of Genesis/
You Should Be Greatfull, My 9 Thinks Of You With Extra-Lead/
And Your Low Skill Level Flow Reminds Me Of That Of Special-Ed./
^^^^^^^^^^^^NICE OPENER MAYNE GOOD PUNCH



You Wont Get Reconciled, You Know I Got A Better-Style
And You Quick To Get Locked Upon Action Like Pedofiles
I Spit Passionately, So NIgga Dont Come Snappin-At-Me
Even If I'm Whack... The Fact Is You Whacker-Than-Me
Ya Rappin-Is-Weak, You're Gonna Take Some Fatal-Blows
And Then You Can Get Ya Ass Torn Up Like Anal-Hoes!!!
When The Flamal-Throws Your Bitch Ass Is Afraid-To-Bust
While Overdoze Is Here Wit A 9 Turning Ya Brains-To-Mush
And Then Stain-Your-Guts.. Face It... U Aint Close-To-Me
You Destinied To Lose Dawg I Got You Bagged Like Groceries
So Admit It Openly.... You Suck We Got No Alliance,-Ass
Basically Coz Ya Shit Puts Me To Sleep Like Science-Class
^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE FLOW'Z AND PUNCHES NICE MAYNE KEEP DOIN YO THANG



This QUEER-IS-BRAINLESS Facing Me I'LL Fucking SPEER-HIS-ANUS, So CLEAR-THA-STATIONS Before I Leave You TEARING-SHAMELESS, My EARS-ARE-PATIENT You Just An IRRITATION... The Only Thing That Bothers Me More Is How WEIRD-YA-NAME-IS//
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ HA PERSONAL AND A PUNCH NICE CLOSA






If All You Know~The~Truth Then You Realise Im Not~Gunna~Lose/
Accepted That You~Can't~Spit So You Must Have Swallowed~The~Truth/
Hold No Sorrow~For~Losers I'll Render~Ya~Frame With
Dents~In~Ya~Brain/
You Weren't Just Hit With The~Ugly~Stick You Were
Molested~And~Raped/
And Im Tempted~To~Say How Qidd MinX Has A Constant Negative~Way/
The Only Time You Been Positive Was When You Got Tested~For~Aids/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ALL FLOW BUT NO PUNCHES



And Ive Yet To Mention~You're~Fake This Faggot Gets
Labled~As~Whack/
These Spineless child Like~Me~Dissing~Him So He Can Be
Taken~Aback/
Then You Can Savour~The~Fact My Weapon~Of~Speech Is A Lesson~For~Free/
If We Placed A Wager~On~The~Battle You Couldnt Get The Better~Of~Me/
Im Flipping~Your~Weak Script ho This Kid Im
Ripping~With~Ease/
If You Excersised Your Skills You Couldn't Make A
Nice~Figure~Of~Speech/
Showing Will Trigger~Defeat Parts Of Your Corpse I'll
Rent~Out~To~Queers/
So When Peeps Say You~Were~Whack You'll Finally Be Lending~An~Ear/
Look Im Acsending~Your~Fear With Every Line That I Say~And~Sail/
Til I Give You Cardiac~Arrests And You're Too Poor To
Make~The~Bail/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT U HAD FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT REALLY HITTIN IT,,,,,,,,,ELEVATE ON DAT MAYNE NICE FLOW'Z BUT I DIDNT SEE ANY DECENT PUNCHES


DOZ-U HAD GOOD PUNCHES DECENT ONES ALSO,,,,,,,,,,AND U HAD GOOD FLOW KEEP IT UP MAYNE,,,,,,,,,,,ALSO PERSONALS DA CLOSA WAS SIK~~!



QIDD-WORK ON DEM PUNCHES DIDNT SEE NO HITTIN AT YO OPPENENT TODAY U HAVE GOOD FLOW,,,,,,,BUT ATTATCH GOOD PUNCHES WITH IT OK

GOOD VERSE BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT REALLY HITTIN IT

~PEACE~

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iigh thanx vote people plz i think that i need 2 more

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are you the same over dose from rappersforrum.com?

Voted For: xOverdozEx

Tite battle but xoverdosex wins, just a betta structure and flow.

ok look u in my crew so it about time i look at your shit man and i got to say it ain't as bad as i thought it would be. but there still thing i didn't like: get rid of shit like Finisher or Warming Up...., i don't like how the opener and the warm up and the finisher all have different flows. alot of personnals need more punches and that about it

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