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..Xplicit.. 5 100.00%
FlyWhiteGuy 0 0%
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Old 10-30-04, 12:08 PM   #1
FlyWhiteGuy
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..Xplicit.. vs FlyWhiteGuy

IP: 226A FA64

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-02-04 at 11:08 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.
 
Old 10-30-04, 12:09 PM   #2
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FlyWhiteGuy has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 12:09 PM.
 
Old 10-30-04, 12:30 PM   #3
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..Xplicit.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 12:30 PM.
 
Old 10-30-04, 12:33 PM   #4
FlyWhiteGuy
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IP: 226A FA64

I'm Battlin this kid Xplicit.
Wen he messaged me askin me 2 Battle he sed he woz only gonna drop a few linez... he said he'd only drop six ?
This faggot scared, this bitch sucks dicks..
Amma win this battle, every1 predicts...

Now he's readin diss his heads in a mess
Thinkin he shudn't of message me, he caused himself stress
He's readin, knowin these lyricz impress
knowin amma beat him n becum an online success
Awww... bless...

This kid'z ma first victim..
Wen I Beat him probably start teh whine,
Chattin bout 'battle wernt uze, battle woz mine'
if he did that in real life, i'd brake his spine

Ad Brake his back in half wid juss 1 hand
Ad make him scared, like a robot he'd follow ma every demand
Yerr, bitch'd follow ma every command
Fuck diss shit, Xplicit am lyrically attackin u, u understand?

.............Try n lyrically abuse me
Text choke, let everybody here see...
That I'm a MUCH betta Emcee...
 
Old 10-30-04, 12:36 PM   #5
Sik Wit It
 
From: Florida
IP: 258C A279

imma post my verse in a little while...

*eating now*
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Old 10-30-04, 12:53 PM   #6
Sik Wit It
 
From: Florida
IP: 258C A279

Aight…yo check it

Ya shit wouldn’t be felt or seen better if u slice a slit in ya vision…
Determining your sex was still left up to a doctors split decision…
WhiteGuy went fishing and this kid got hooked cause of his mouth…
I asked how u accomplished those wins..and all hands point south*…
I must be crazy, accepting a battle with the dicks driving ‘Miss Daisy’…
This fags words get me..lost but..still can’t seem to amaze me…
Hey!..we do share the love of ‘pussy’ since I accepted your challenge…
Wow ever since WhiteGuy came to this site in elevation you’ve grown a full ‘inch’… (get it)

*=oops…haha forgot u have no-wins (yet)
 
Old 11-01-04, 06:49 PM   #7
FlyWhiteGuy
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IP: 226A FA64

Bitch can't say shit, yea i got no ONLINE winz...
B4 u spit u eat, tryina battle me wid ur 3 chinz

Yo fat boy, u say ma worst get u lost
Relax n read fat boy, juss defrost..

Cuddn't hardly see dem wordz...
Yo jus like ur dick tha writinz fuckin tiny
N tha lyricz is too fuckin whiney
Get sum money bitch, these coinz is shiney

U Spittin like u sumkinda online pimp?
Bitch i know your a online gimp
I'll hit ur leg wid ma fist n give u a bad limp
An u won't do shit, coz ur a big fat wimp....

Insted of spittin ur fat ass starts eatin
Only way u gonna win this is if u start cheatin
No Need... u will recive a beatin!
N den maybe Tupac will be given u a greetin

Yo am soon gonna be known as a lyrical legend
Why u even wanna contend?
Weather i verbally murder u or let u live will depend
All on weather choose to attack or choose to defend
Right now, defence is what u should intend

Coz ma Rhymez are simply Rude,
An yo amma conclude..
Wid hey DUDE! you kno your fat ass want summore food...

So now u got summore time teh eat
Juss b4 u spit 2 tha next beat
So Long Fattie, go get sum food... I repeat..
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Sum PPL say tha MCin Aint For Da White Race...
...Why This Sayin This When They Kno Its A Disgrase..
N Yeah Them PPL need a can of mase anna few hundred bullets released in a spray all ova der face /Just 2 Stick dem in der place /But really they aint racist,they just hatin on me coz dey cant match ma pace..
Seriously, if u really dont think MCin is for tha white ppl I aint gonna change ure oppinnionz so ay, I got one thing 2 say, An thats that ure umm GAY!
 
Old 11-01-04, 06:55 PM   #8
streetryda
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This was feedback posted for FlyWhiteGuy

IP: 408D D2A2

checkin polls.......but whiteguy you need to elevate your shit.....
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Old 11-01-04, 07:16 PM   #9
eph
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Voted For: ..Xplicit..

votes here:

flywhiteguy: ya verse had no competitive portions, ya structure was off, ya flow wasnt there, ya wordplay didnt show, i didnt see real metas, a few attempted multis, but over all it wasnt even decent, ya tried. its prolly just that ya new.

Xplicit: ya verse had some nice multis, ya structure was aight, i cant say ya lines were stretched cause ya used a different font and size, so i cant rele tell where ya were going with that. but ya personals connected, and ya punches landed, very understandable, ya had a decent opener, the closure was faulty, it only rhymed with an accent. next time make the rhyme scheme obvious, it helps out, trust me. but you definately too this battle, nice job on the punches, and congrats, return the favor, ill get you the link.


vote: Xplicit
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Old 11-01-04, 07:18 PM   #10
eph
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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=158235

the link, give it some thought, thanx.
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Old 11-02-04, 06:17 PM   #11
FlyWhiteGuy
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IP: 2F59 7BBD

It wasn't even decent?... psst.. haterz... mine was much betta den Xplicits, he just talked aloada fuckin bull...
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Sum PPL say tha MCin Aint For Da White Race...
...Why This Sayin This When They Kno Its A Disgrase..
N Yeah Them PPL need a can of mase anna few hundred bullets released in a spray all ova der face /Just 2 Stick dem in der place /But really they aint racist,they just hatin on me coz dey cant match ma pace..
Seriously, if u really dont think MCin is for tha white ppl I aint gonna change ure oppinnionz so ay, I got one thing 2 say, An thats that ure umm GAY!
 
Old 11-02-04, 06:22 PM   #12
LIL'DREW
Banned: Cheating
 
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From: St. Louis MO
IP: 4B33 A61C

Voted For: ..Xplicit..

damn...explicit not only won...he blew dis dude out da water...

Explicit: damn...tite ass verse...nice punches...flow...and structure...

FWG: you give us white folks a bad name...damn...
got nuthin'...

v/ Ex
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Old 11-03-04, 05:37 PM   #13
FlyWhiteGuy
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IP: 226A FA64

Fuck U..... Fuckin Haterz, Fuck diss online Shitt......
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Sum PPL say tha MCin Aint For Da White Race...
...Why This Sayin This When They Kno Its A Disgrase..
N Yeah Them PPL need a can of mase anna few hundred bullets released in a spray all ova der face /Just 2 Stick dem in der place /But really they aint racist,they just hatin on me coz dey cant match ma pace..
Seriously, if u really dont think MCin is for tha white ppl I aint gonna change ure oppinnionz so ay, I got one thing 2 say, An thats that ure umm GAY!
 
Old 11-05-04, 03:52 PM   #14
Sik Wit It
 
From: Florida
IP: 258C A279

up up up...

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Old 11-05-04, 10:56 PM   #15
Sik Wit It
 
From: Florida
IP: 258C A279

..Uppin' this thread people..
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