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Lyriclesolja 5 83.33%
skillz 1 16.67%
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Old 11-02-04, 09:59 AM   #1
skillz
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From: columbus,Oh
Lyriclesolja vs skillz

IP: 7E3E A80D

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8 - UNLIMITED Lines
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-05-04 at 09:59 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

[b]DQ'ed - went under line limit/[b]
 
Old 11-02-04, 10:03 AM   #2
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skillz has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-04 10:03 AM.
 
Old 11-02-04, 07:10 PM   #3
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Lyriclesolja has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-04 07:10 PM.
 
Old 11-03-04, 10:12 AM   #4
skillz
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Raw illusions make me draw conclusions engage in rage
u couldn't be a lyrical solja if u wrote raps with damien waynes in the movie major payne
Like a print press sent the best news as a night fighter
But on RV not a winner yet will bruise this typewriter
skillz will show u the deal but before that u gotta cut the cards
so when i sendem to ya you betta have a good hand to beat my barz
 
Old 11-04-04, 12:09 AM   #5
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
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Yo homie claims to have "skillz" but he got merked by quidd Minx,
Hes out of his element like a priest passin a round of drinks,
Lost cause he choked he got so many excuses he cant blame it on a jinx,
He lost to Tito Bronsky five votes to one,
Claims to be good but he like a empty machine gun,
Talkin bout "I was born in that battle" if so then your his son,
Said "his turn awaits" then something i discoverd,
Judical didnt want to collab. wit him and neither do others,
Then he posted a collab. threaed and got no replys,
To me that shit doesnt surprise thank god yall were wise,
Cause no one wants to see his verse its like a stab to the eyes.
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Old 11-04-04, 03:28 PM   #6
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
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Uppin............................................. ....
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Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
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Old 11-04-04, 07:31 PM   #7
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
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Uppin this............................................
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Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
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Old 11-05-04, 12:48 AM   #8
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
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Uppin............................................. ......
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Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
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Old 11-05-04, 08:01 AM   #9
skillz
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lookin for votes stop sleepin peeps....................
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I got my own personal slave she really got a curfew
Cook and clean for the kid like silly in color purple
I know you wanna pop me but
If I hit you first, the exit wound gon be the size of a hockey puck
Fuck, I really hold the rubber
I send Sparks at you and I don't mean Emilio or Bubba

-lloyd banks



Me vs. Simple Sage
 
Old 12-24-04, 08:46 PM   #10
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
From: (210)
IP: 8A17 F701

Uppin............................................. ......
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Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
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Old 12-28-04, 11:39 PM   #11
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
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Uppin............................................. ......
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Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
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Old 12-28-04, 11:43 PM   #12
Chuck Low
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Voted For: skillz

SKILLZ GOT THIS SHIT WITH THA FIRST 2 BARS DAWG U GOT SOME KILLA ASS METAPHORS FA REAL...ALL SKILLZ THA OTHA ONE WHAT EVA HIS NAME LOOK LIKE A ILLITERATE BASTARD SO HOLLA CHECK OUT THESE RTF
CHUCK LOW VS. DEATH
CHUCK LOW VS. DENIED TRUTH
CHUCK LOW VS. KKKHATER
OPEN MIC: THA CYCLE

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
 
Old 12-29-04, 03:18 AM   #13
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
From: (210)
IP: 8A17 F701

Ok my whole verse was a personal....learn sum fuckin newbie.........Uppin..
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Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
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Old 12-29-04, 03:22 AM   #14
Kyleon
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This was feedback posted for Lyriclesolja

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checkin pollz..lookz like a weak battle..lol
 
Old 12-30-04, 09:42 PM   #15
I.D.
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Voted For: Lyriclesolja


Lyricle Solja
Alright Hommie Good Verse, Came Pretty Decent...Had Some Nice Punches In Here, In This Verse You Had Good Personals, But You Can Make It Better..Structure Was Decent Though Try And Make The Lines Line Up In All One Straight Line, Vocabulary Was Alright Kind Of Basic But It Was Decent....WordPlay, It Was Cool...But You Could Of Made It Better In Here

Skills
Alright Nice Verse You As Well As He Had Personals, Punches As Well Your Structure Was Fucked Up Though....That Needs To Be Elivated Alot....Vocabulary Was Basic I Mean For Real, But Multi's Was Here Pretty Good...In The Opener You Had Your Best Vocabulary, The Rest Was Weak....Not Much WordPlay In Your Verse, Just Coz You Put Those "" On Letters Does Not Make It WordPlay So Change That............
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.Over All This Battle Wasn't To Great But It Was Decent Enough, The Categories Was Good, On Personals And Meta's Also Multi's But If I Break It Down It Will Be Like This....

Personals-Tie
Punches-Tie
WordPlay-L.S.
Structure-L.S.
Vocabulary-L.S.

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