shit, vote didnt go thru, i will post it below, wat i originally sent as my vote

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Voted For: EastCoast

Probably mythically aged, and yet you aint even hit puberty/
Ritually waiting till u get married cuz "I have to keep my purity"/- eastcoast
-nice punchline
i think eastcoast came a little harder than you with personals
so my vote goes to him

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I got my own personal slave she really got a curfew
Cook and clean for the kid like silly in color purple
I know you wanna pop me but
If I hit you first, the exit wound gon be the size of a hockey puck
Fuck, I really hold the rubber
I send Sparks at you and I don't mean Emilio or Bubba

-lloyd banks



Me vs. Simple Sage

Voted For: EastCoast

yo east coast dat was nice had some wordplay in
dat man i like dat

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stop fucking getting herbs to vote on this shit, we need real emcees not these wack ass pretenders!!!!


These two votes are going to be cancelled again, fuck your an idiot...you know you lost but instead you have to get people with 24 fucking posts to vote...retard!

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i didnt get nobody to vote...i just looked and that dude is on a fucking voting and postin spree....i aint getting nobody to vote on shit...so u need to stop trying to acuuse people of shit....fucking fag just mad cuz u losing....o by the way i aint stupid i no that shit is finna be cancelled...i looked at all the stuff he's voted on and it's all finna be cancelled

'finna'? what the fuck, go get yourself an education, then you'll actually understand some wordplay and some of my punches...

it doesn't matter if these are going to get cancelled, because you're getting banned voting for yourself!

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checkin dem polls........................................

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Voted For: JPoll

this was kinda lopsided but decent... imma break it down for ya here, good battle both of you....

Eastcoast... structure was aweful.. hate the / after every line and it wasnt set up correctly... flow was good, i liked the way you started off with the multis, that got you some points... punches were there, personals not so much... you had some wordplay and creativity, overall not a bad verse but could have been better....5/10

JPoll- shit was tight... structure was iffy, liked the opener about him claiming the whol east coast, shit was funny and thats a pluss... punches were good and the personals hit hard... multis...eh.... had wordplay and creativity... overall a good verse and the punches and personals won it for you... 7/10

overall this was a pretty decent battle... no hate to east coast but this one goes to Jpoll.....

VOTE-JPoll............

Voted For: JPoll


Egotistically you can't beat me, cuz I never miss aim/ Statistically the king of this game, and I'm here to reclaim/
2/10
The ballistical championship, leaving Jpoll with no votes/
And a sedistical slit throat, using a verse that he already wrote/
2/10
Your not rhythmical, you can't win, I'm on a higher level/
It's mystical, your six feet beneath, and i'm the one with the shovel/
1/10
Probably mythically aged, and yet you aint even hit puberty/
Ritually waiting till u get married cuz "I have to keep my purity"/
3/10
That's what J says, yet he keeps a spare bottle beside the bed/
Only a fag jacksoff with thoughts of a man inside his head/
1/10

punches were lame and played
wordplay was non existent
ya similies werent there
no metas
and no personals
kinda like a regular freestyle


Another hurb child, kids claiming to be a whole coast...
Too bad I'm like Rocky, punching his frozen raw roast...
3/10
And its true and it's on, even with a quick key,
You can't think you'll win...
......................cause not even your family believes
2/10
You'll get owned, if you go toe to toe with the champ...
I mean fuck as his desktop he's ink...
.....................ready to be hit with the NOBODY stamp...
5/10
You got cramps yet, cause your meager streak is done...
This kids as stupid as nelly claiming to be number one..
4/10
No I'm the king, I've had belts and I'll show you my ring..
You with my win is as unlikely,
...........as you and Marilyn Monroe having an all night fling
3/10

punches were kinda simple and plain
ya wordplay was slightly better
i didnt like ya structure
ya metas were ok i guess
ya personals were better than ya opponents

Poll gets this 4 overall better wordplay and punches

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Voted For: JPoll

jpoll took this easy.
eastcoast had no punches whatsoever,struc needs workin on too.wordplay woz ok, and some of the concepts were decent enough but the punches were pretty lame...u need ta elevate a lot b4 tryin to beat sumone of jpolls skill.

jpoll came average really, nothin hit too hard, but in every area his verse was better so he gets my vote.

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vote on these and a honest vote will be returned

re~verb vs legion (topical)
re~verb vs shard (text)

uppin this people....yup.....................................

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uppin dis shit.....................................

Obviously you beat him...................................

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

LOL at the votes.. i wouldve voted for you but ..... i dunno why...

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!