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11-23-04, 07:13 PM | #1 | |||
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love in first-sight
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I was walking out of the music store with me and my friends
I had on an brown hoodie , black pant’z , and some timbs that’s when I saw u walking out of victoria with u and cha friends Had on an green blouse, green pant’z , and converse , green latins I had my head down but I didn’t know what made me look up But thank god that I did cause ya beauty was blessed from tha above My jaw was jittering if I’d walk up and talk to u I’ll prop stutter Your hair was shining and gleeming like brown shine haze coco butter Girl ya eyes is like an newborn kittin, I guess love in 1st sight is true Then u’d turn around and started to walk away then I felt kinda blue I’d embarrass myself taking an 1st step forward step on my shoe lace and fell Felt kinda stupid, just laying there on the ground, then I heard an voice ‘need help” When she’d hold my hand I felt this hot warmth feeling coming from tha heart that’s when we started ending up having an A & B conversation from tha start End up giggling and laughing then told my homies we going to an special paradise She looked at me “ paradise?” I said “yea, paradise lets me take u on an car ride” to me I already felt we was an good couple already like bobby and whitney I felt this was an long relationship like an phantom u see within me An love first-sight just turned my day into an good-day like heaven Me and her sitting on the beach chillin my first-date and iam still a virgin FFFFFFFFFFFEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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11-23-04, 07:57 PM | #2 | |||
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IP: 28E1 C1A0
yo...that was nice man...good structure n flow....isnt u d-illar-1 from rapworlds and planetrap...
8.5/10 stay up
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11-23-04, 07:58 PM | #3 | |||
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IP: C385 8A31
Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Damn Damn~! Shhhhhhhhhhhhh
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11-23-04, 07:59 PM | #4 | |||
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lol......ite nigga........................................
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