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11-24-04, 05:15 PM | #1 | |||||
Capital Punishment
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im the intellectual~prophecy of this hip-hopcracy / lyrical prodigy layin down rhymes to show technique properly// visit pharmacy... to find ur mental medication/ i got a mase wit spikes on it 2 come and knock ur face in/ hide in ur basement, the only safe location/ ur ass vacatin when ur family tree need evacuation/ u play the station and my ass is solid breakin/ makin peace look like an indonesian vacation// get ur reservation cuz ur here longer than u planned to be/ fluidz lay the track deeper than the stars in the galaxy// watch this tradegy try to vocate me of burglary/ wait for christmas, cuz this clause dont bring presents... just surgery// destroy u verbally... wit consistent persitance/ stretch u across the floor wider than universal distance/ save ya visions ... and go thru with coallitions/ ur as misplaced saint angels in state prisons// the rapid man comin thru like an astrovan / turn this happy land unuseful like a broken hand// hope u understand... people like me are the pacifists at battle/ more explicit than gilligan with a whore on an island witout a paddle/ hold the lantel... cuz a heat like me to hot to handle / got reality underviewed like the media when they find a scandal// my time is up and rapid's here to end it/ caught up in my room like a student that just got suspended // Sign Zilla
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11-24-04, 08:38 PM | #2 | |||||
Capital Punishment
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IP: CC32 A77D
Gimme some FeedBack !!! >:|
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11-25-04, 12:20 AM | #3 | ||||||||
mess with me get cooked
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IP: D489 4B50
dont stretch cha lines that much
nice wordplay but work on the flow and work on keeping ya lines lengh its aiiiiiiigiht nuttin stand out but dem wordplays elevate 7/10 drop an feedback in my open mic "expressing freestyle" *nuff said*
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11-25-04, 05:48 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 2D2F 38BD
i liked this nice jey came pretty good i dont think u stretched ya lines i give u a 8/10 on this drop
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