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Old 11-22-04, 12:27 PM   #1
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Serenade(collab..LayDeMc n Curtisey)

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/laydemcmusic.htm

the effects is kind of heavy now that i realize it but oh well i like it


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Old 11-22-04, 07:46 PM   #2
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Old 11-22-04, 10:33 PM   #3
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stop viewin n reply fuckaz
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Old 11-23-04, 01:27 AM   #4
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damn... who is that on that first verse ??.. that shit was niiice.. his name is courtisee ?.. i like dat nigga flow.. word.. damn.. we got a femceeee hereeeee .. she was spittin .. hella much better than half the other niggas on the.. word.. good shit girl.. keep elevatin miss salt and peppa
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Old 11-23-04, 01:36 AM   #5
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lol thats my nigga Curtisey he teachin me the ropes about this audio thing i got much room for improvement lol....

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/curtiseymusic.htm
^thats his page lol check em out i like promotin my nigga .thnx tho!
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Old 11-23-04, 06:42 PM   #6
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upping for more feed thnx..
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Old 11-23-04, 07:34 PM   #7
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it was aight i think your scarificing lyrical content for flow which i hate i think you can do better your mentor has much flow but mediocre lyrics try to put fire in your lyrics then worry about flow after
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Old 11-23-04, 08:05 PM   #8
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lol.. no.. thats a text head ^.. Get a Solid Flow first... then put lyrics in it where lyrics fit.. thats a texthead mentality empire.............. Without flow, all you have is words.. Once you can master flow, you can make lyrics fit..
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Old 11-23-04, 10:06 PM   #9
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yea listen to calamity, not empire........ that first guy is alot better cuz i can hear wat he's actually sayin better...... turn ur vocals up just alil bit and pronounce alil better i guess.... but the flow was aight.. this shit was pretty good.. original beat???? cuz that shits pretty good too... keep it up and im feelin ur flow

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Old 11-24-04, 12:04 PM   #10
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word thanx and yea empire...i gotta get my delivery down before i worry about lyrics...one i get that done then i can worry about making more sense..im just tryin to elevate on the delevery tip right now...baby steps nigga. thnx for feed.
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Old 11-25-04, 01:25 AM   #11
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this wasn't bad at all....first cat had good flow, lyircs was cool,lack emotion somewhat but his tight flow made up for it, good drop from him

IDH...your flow was good, but yeah it did seem like u was flow focused instead of lyrically focused..u had ya multies rolling out nice tho, u got a nice voice, def. a top femcee at least from waht I've heard, your delivery was somewhat blan tho..almost like u was trying to imitate dude before you, I'm just nitpicking cuz overall it was a good drop...I'd say a def. 7.5/10..fo sure..good shit, keep dropping, keep elevating an sky's da limit shawtie...holla...........1
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Old 11-25-04, 09:30 PM   #12
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Tru much respect ...comin from you..u skilled wit it so imma take ya advice n run wit it. stay up n Get ya shit out there
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lol.. no.. thats a text head ^.. Get a Solid Flow first... then put lyrics in it where lyrics fit.. thats a texthead mentality empire.............. Without flow, all you have is words.. Once you can master flow, you can make lyrics fit..

no i record everyday and not on a computer im working on my album now write first then break in and out to formulate to the beat or use a 4 count and flow will always stay on beat
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word thanx and yea empire...i gotta get my delivery down before i worry about lyrics...one i get that done then i can worry about making more sense..im just tryin to elevate on the delevery tip right now...baby steps nigga. thnx for feed.

lol ok ma you know i got hella faith in your shit when you get something working well collab fo sho .you got mangement?
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Old 11-30-04, 09:07 AM   #15
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wish i could hear this my net is acting fucking gay for the past couple weeks....so imma get at this soon!

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