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12-02-04, 02:26 PM | #1 | |||||
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R.I.S.E.(The Introduction)
IP: 28AD 5545
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1778410
YO Rise new site ,how you gone destroy this one your flowz is the best,lyricaly noone fuckin wit you/ spit that heat kid YO YO My minds in verbal distress crazy flow in ill depth/ no mc can match my breath,sharp bladed words rip thru flesh/ lyrcial king aim for best.my mystic crush any foes thats left/ so fuck burring the hatchet,im like bullets from a wratchet/ cranium will get cracked in,my verse bringing the facts in/ murderous mc back in action a classic flow im deep so far in the blackness/ R.I.S.E.usin biblical tatics,revalations lyrical axises/ my verse chop heads off like a sword with the axes/ niggas waba get ahead so much that i had to rise by going backwards/ i took another route,from NY ,cali,and the new south/ back to New York,back with the pitch fork real talk/ cuz im bless, like NAS carry the cross, weak mc's gone feel the force.../left dead by a hearse door,who want war? im like a mind in the ocean i flow for shore(sure)so hard watch your spinal cord get torned/ this is my freedom of speech,im like a thousand disciples roundin your street/loaded with heat,to face off with the rest of mc's so who the first to leak step up to fall down unfold death L-Y-R-I-C-A-L--Y/ I got the spirit in me GOD LYRCAL CREW destroy many -enemies my rep has been enveyed niggas wana space bar me/ delete a style that far from wack im ill im nasty/ this is my introduction ,writting to put hiphop back in function/ whoever want it wit me im crushin,niggas is LL COOL J just stay hushin,fagget niggas rhymes stay blushing,/ but mc's wana die my minds unstable im in a lyrical concussion in a deep thought where my words is gona come out bussin bullseye BITCHES so come rushin/ Holla my Intro what up to the whole site respect.1hun R.I.S.E. |
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12-02-04, 03:28 PM | #2 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: 28AD 5545
uppin for feedback
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b I paint pictures with a deep mind and draw lines/that become rhymes,black words with clear thought true weapons retire nines/ my styles hostile like 2 lions, then i rip mc's that be lien when they rhymen rise heat the rap game like crackpots lyrics stay fryin/ overral battle record,18-12-10-k.o. G.L.C.God's Lyrical Crew We murder any mc' in any crew and any crew with a MIC... R.I.S.E. the illest mc,death to mc's that ain't down wit me/ Holla R.I.S.E. |
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12-02-04, 11:45 PM | #3 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: 0825 899A
real niggas drop real replies,
Holla R.I.S.E.
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b I paint pictures with a deep mind and draw lines/that become rhymes,black words with clear thought true weapons retire nines/ my styles hostile like 2 lions, then i rip mc's that be lien when they rhymen rise heat the rap game like crackpots lyrics stay fryin/ overral battle record,18-12-10-k.o. G.L.C.God's Lyrical Crew We murder any mc' in any crew and any crew with a MIC... R.I.S.E. the illest mc,death to mc's that ain't down wit me/ Holla R.I.S.E. |
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12-03-04, 12:06 AM | #4 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: 0825 899A
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b I paint pictures with a deep mind and draw lines/that become rhymes,black words with clear thought true weapons retire nines/ my styles hostile like 2 lions, then i rip mc's that be lien when they rhymen rise heat the rap game like crackpots lyrics stay fryin/ overral battle record,18-12-10-k.o. G.L.C.God's Lyrical Crew We murder any mc' in any crew and any crew with a MIC... R.I.S.E. the illest mc,death to mc's that ain't down wit me/ Holla R.I.S.E. |
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12-03-04, 06:35 AM | #5 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
couldnt really catch your flow, But the content is good. Rhyme's are good.
good shit on dropping a link aswell, needa see more people following your role. |
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12-03-04, 10:15 AM | #6 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: 0825 899A
good lookin son still uppin
Holla R.I.S.E.
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b I paint pictures with a deep mind and draw lines/that become rhymes,black words with clear thought true weapons retire nines/ my styles hostile like 2 lions, then i rip mc's that be lien when they rhymen rise heat the rap game like crackpots lyrics stay fryin/ overral battle record,18-12-10-k.o. G.L.C.God's Lyrical Crew We murder any mc' in any crew and any crew with a MIC... R.I.S.E. the illest mc,death to mc's that ain't down wit me/ Holla R.I.S.E. |
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12-03-04, 04:01 PM | #7 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: A68D 9BC9
uppin for feed back.
Holla THE R
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b I paint pictures with a deep mind and draw lines/that become rhymes,black words with clear thought true weapons retire nines/ my styles hostile like 2 lions, then i rip mc's that be lien when they rhymen rise heat the rap game like crackpots lyrics stay fryin/ overral battle record,18-12-10-k.o. G.L.C.God's Lyrical Crew We murder any mc' in any crew and any crew with a MIC... R.I.S.E. the illest mc,death to mc's that ain't down wit me/ Holla R.I.S.E. |
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12-03-04, 04:12 PM | #8 | |||
Straight Hustla.
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
Nice . .
Not bad . . nicely representing New york. Even though I'm from london, yungin. But this was only TexT . . If this was audio your flow would be terrible/off beat try doing an audio and you will see. Decent vocab... Could have been better. Good Multi's 7/10 Keep Elevating.
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12-03-04, 04:16 PM | #9 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: BD07 C76E
same here 7/10................................................ .......
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12-03-04, 06:58 PM | #10 | ||||||
New to RB
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IP: 3240 794D
that stuff was Cool, I do of course like all kinds of rap, 8/10
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12-03-04, 07:10 PM | #11 | |||||||
New to RV
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yuppz
IP: 3240 794D
yeah it was hard im wit ^^^......
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12-03-04, 08:40 PM | #12 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: 0825 899A
Good lookin,much respect,but has far for audio,
i been there and done that,i finshed my album so im good on that point but much R Holla The R
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b I paint pictures with a deep mind and draw lines/that become rhymes,black words with clear thought true weapons retire nines/ my styles hostile like 2 lions, then i rip mc's that be lien when they rhymen rise heat the rap game like crackpots lyrics stay fryin/ overral battle record,18-12-10-k.o. G.L.C.God's Lyrical Crew We murder any mc' in any crew and any crew with a MIC... R.I.S.E. the illest mc,death to mc's that ain't down wit me/ Holla R.I.S.E. |
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12-03-04, 09:29 PM | #13 | ||||||||
Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: 98F1 AA7F
This was okay.. very mediocre but you have alot of potentilal...
6.5/10. keep elevating... dont give up.
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