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lol^ I didn't even use a banks punch. wow. uppin' this....................................

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Voted For: SPuL

Dent, I Fucking Hate Your Structure...
But I Did Like Your Verse Better...
Even If Your Lines Were Streched Like None Other...
Aiight Heres The Breakdown...

Punches:Tie
Wordplay: Dent
Flow: Spul
Structure: Spul
Opener: Spul
Closer: Dent

I Actually Liked Dents Verse Better...
But When I Weighed Out All The Criteria Spul Took This...
Even Though I Wasnt Really Feelin His Ish...
.One.

aiight uppin.........................................

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Voted For: SPuL

spul gets this for better structure
easier flow
harder punches
better metas
better wordplay

Identical ya punches didnt really stick out 2 me
ya wordplay was ok
and ya structure seemed like it was all over the place
ya flow wasent on point at all ..it was all choppy
u need 2 come a lil bit more consistent

this goes 2 spul for better structure
punches

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Voted For: SPuL

vote SPuL.. pretty much its like this.. didnt even have to read the battle cause identikal's lines were so longs.. structure was fucked and flow was way off... SPuL good battle.. no more corny ass punches.. these were pretyt good.. nice wordplay.. weerd.. ur starting to look like old spul again.. u win this because of punches structure and flow.. no personals really from either..

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Voted For: SPuL

identikal:

it's no shock kid is fraud, inherited terrorist genes so he's the type to carry bombs
if ghostwriters are rv's version of steroids then u've been exposed like barry bonds
^^good meta but thats it 6/10
dml...? now i guess when it comes to online relationships u seem to be the better man
child fame...naw, spul seems to be the result of his father getting raped at neverland
^^lmao funny but played concept 5/10
kid has got no life, stays on rv when he's bored, it even shows in his thread names
came out the closet, he even admitted to having dsl,....
.................................................. ...now wonder why he likes to perform headgames
^^wack 4/10
u was all excited and geeked, pm'ing me on AIM just to tell me about ya chat bot
ya not wanted here, ya pops should've have just left u...
............................................as a stain by his playboy magazine and his crack pot
^^stretched as fuck 3/10
said ya got banned for biting a quote...well god damn i guess u still ain't learned
no fucking...clinic fertilization, we all know that u was born from an inmates sperm
^^wack 4/10
i remember her well, ya mom was the only woman i knew that could give head long
but i guess if i were to go to her grave site...
.................................................a nd piss on her tombstone i would be dead wrong
^^ehh decent 5/10
i'm about ready to fuck this bitch, flavored condoms, someone hand me a tan rubber
ok now let's see, kyrogenix, latinkitten,...
.......................i guess for future ghostwritings spul could just ask his grandmother
^^ehh good personal wack set up 5/10

overall : 32/70 (46%)

SPuL:

Say DQ wins are wack, you shouldn’t keep them on the shelf
I should call you John Kerry, cuz you contradict yourself
^^dope meta decent opener 7/10
I'll have yo head spinnin' like wheels on bicycle
Change yo name again, but the result will be indentikaL
^^decent personal 5/10
My rhymes are cerebral, hit you wit ‘em, say "you’re mental"
And I’ll beat you wit no words, like you was an instrumental
^^dopest bar of this battle 9/10
The guards lift you off, and then I sky up like a rocket
Your rhymes stink like a foot, so it’s ‘bout time that you sock it
^^lmao this was so gay it was dope 7/10
When people see yo face, they always start to act a fool
You get many people runnin’… “Are you the last day of school?”
^^wack meta how you worded it 4/10
I’ll separate yo lines up, like I was a fuckin’ comma
Put two L’s on yo name and then say, “You suck, ‘LLama”’
^^wtf is this 2/10

overall : 34/60 (57%)

vote: SPuL

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Voted For: Identical

hot battle fa sho...but i think we know who has the upper hand....my vote for identikal
punchlines....8/10
struscture.....8/10
flow....7/10( a lil erratic at times)
personals(8/10)
multis(8.5/10)
best line-said ya got banned for biting a quote...well god damn i guess u still ain't learned
no fucking...clinic fertilization, we all know that u was born from an inmates sperm
i remember her well, ya mom was the only woman i knew that could give head long
but i guess if i were to go to her grave site...
.................................................a nd piss on her tombstone i would be dead wrong
^^^^^WHOA^^^^


Spul-punchlines....6/10
struscture.....9/10
flow....7/10( a lil erratic at times)
personals(6/10)
mutils-6/10
best line-Say DQ wins are wack, you shouldn’t keep them on the shelf
I should call you John Kerry, cuz you contradict yourself
^^and that was barely decent...step it up playboi...ive seen u do better........
and make sure yall vote on one of my battles...i will check!