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12-23-04, 11:22 PM
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Rob and Kill(Collabo...feedback needed)
IP: 216A 4740
This was a collabo wit me and Will Nova he's in blue and I'm in Red...nuff said....I need feedback....peaceezy......
Who is this punk I see chillin wit his homies Lookin real nice got the chain and tha rollies, I just can't believe this nigga got more than me But i got somethin fo that ass...well more than STD's, I'ma roll up on this nigga soon as his boys jet Let me get the Balaclava and the right mind set, Yes yes his boys are up and gone It's just a matter of time now....hope it won't be long, Now i see him walkin slowly toward a bar Nows the time to get him....if i can start the car, Ok I see he stopped let me get up real close Dudes gettin all froggy...now I'll teach him to croak, He shouldn't of spoke soon as I stepped out my whip Playa got all smart yelled for help and then dipped, I'm hot in pursuit..like a fox in a chase Soon as I catch this nigga...I'm shreddin his face, Ain't no if ands or buts...damn this nigga tripped Fell down on hit his head and busted his lip, Oh well should paid more attention Now he'll be payin thru the Def by Mouf pension, Damn, they say the only good witness is a dead one Knife is all I got....fuckin forgot my gun One flick of the wrist and *boom*, this jobs done.... holdin down my block, my fam loiter the 2-4// brute force, bordered by more souls than shoe stores// who bored? cause I'mma get mine a hotta way// sellin everything from trees to snow fo the holidaes// talk 'bout privacy, 89' Ac was well aware// holdin a bigger mug than Disney souvieners// but I ignored the care, continued wit my grind// evenin time, count the tithes, lets relax the mind// Chardeney wine wit L's the size of candy bars// beat bangin hard, game starts to slip take her panties off// a nigga tryna stand me off, look sorta familiar// told my bois to get 'em, this nigga refused to surrenda// tryna get my attention he was so consistant// drunk and twisted, fo fightin I was uncinditioned// my head was spinnin, stumblin and fell to my face// cement I embrace, I felt a knee dig in my waist// Now an altered pace, blood runnin down my arms// heart so rapid wit an incision below my palm//
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One of the reasons that they call me Def by Mouf... Is cuz I chew niggaz up and spit they insides out...   Def vs. Lawless (Hs) Last edited by Def by Mouf : 12-23-04 at 11:38 PM. |
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12-23-04, 11:24 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 216A 4740
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167746
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167494 my links if anymore are needed then......i dunno what to say...guess i'll go get some then.....anyways....feedback plz.
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One of the reasons that they call me Def by Mouf... Is cuz I chew niggaz up and spit they insides out... Def vs. Lawless (Hs) |
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12-23-04, 11:37 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 840F 1F1A
this is a good drop, topic is a little bit played. But apart from that I liked it.keep dropping.
good looking with the link's. |
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12-23-04, 11:42 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 530F E648
MAdd luv Def, I like that one.... keep look out fo future references. Nova, One
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12-23-04, 11:49 PM
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Non-Convicted Rapist
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IP: 212D 4758
that was dope...i never saw n e one do n e thing like that before....2 sides of a story...big ups y'all...i liked Def by Mouf's part best...
"Damn, they say the only good witness is a dead one Knife is all I got....fuckin forgot my gun One flick of the wrist and *boom*, this jobs done...." that was dope
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12-24-04, 12:15 AM
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Non-Convicted Rapist
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IP: 212D 4758
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i liked ur point of view better too...better 2 kill than be killed haha
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12-24-04, 01:28 AM
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IP: 3240 794D
this was a cool drop..both verses were good to me..overall nice collab
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12-24-04, 06:18 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 216A 4740
uppin this feedback plz leave some I need elevation.....
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One of the reasons that they call me Def by Mouf... Is cuz I chew niggaz up and spit they insides out... Def vs. Lawless (Hs) |
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12-25-04, 11:23 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 216A 4740
upping for feed....c'mon share the knowledge peeps everyone could use elevation...no one is perfect....
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One of the reasons that they call me Def by Mouf... Is cuz I chew niggaz up and spit they insides out... Def vs. Lawless (Hs) |
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12-26-04, 07:34 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 216A 4740
uppin once again for feed...anybody.....c'mon leave a link and I'll get at urs..
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One of the reasons that they call me Def by Mouf... Is cuz I chew niggaz up and spit they insides out... Def vs. Lawless (Hs) |
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12-28-04, 11:14 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 216A 4740
C'mon peeps....i need feed.....c'mon.....
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One of the reasons that they call me Def by Mouf... Is cuz I chew niggaz up and spit they insides out... Def vs. Lawless (Hs) |
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12-28-04, 11:53 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 216A 4740
How many times do i have to up this to get feed.....?!?!?!?!?!?!.........GIVE ME SOME DAMN FEEDBACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........GEEZ MAN....WTF?....somebody takes the time out to make an Open mic and can't even geet feedback on it....BULLSHIT.....give me feedback.....FUCK!!!!
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One of the reasons that they call me Def by Mouf... Is cuz I chew niggaz up and spit they insides out... Def vs. Lawless (Hs) |
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12-28-04, 11:59 PM
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...Simply The Best
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IP: 28AD 5545
this was a coo drop...i liked both verses...i didn't too much like the topic tho...it's a little played but this was a nice collab you did wit the topic...8/10
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12-29-04, 12:02 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 216A 4740
thank you..finally someone posting feedback...i thought i was alone talkin to myself for a second there....uppin..
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One of the reasons that they call me Def by Mouf... Is cuz I chew niggaz up and spit they insides out... Def vs. Lawless (Hs) |
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12-30-04, 11:12 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 216A 4740
this is the last time i upp this shit....I'll just make a new one or somethin..peaceezy
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One of the reasons that they call me Def by Mouf... Is cuz I chew niggaz up and spit they insides out... Def vs. Lawless (Hs) |
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