aight.... i juss felt like writin somethin down right now....
so if this sucks, its just w/e is flowin out right now

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=168115
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167929

I got enough flows in my head to be drownin jesus
that gives me the reason to knock yall to pieces
and put yall to peaces with ease before diseases
lead to a deceased list, and leave the world hopeless, needless

i'm heedless to interpret and show the worlds imperfect
the earth is dirt so everything on the world is just scratchin the surface
im worthless... i want out of it, u think u can be all of it
but life sucks.... and all u gotta do is swallow it
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a quick 8 bars... i personally only like 2 of the lines.. and i dont feel like puttin all the quote marks in to point out stuff like wordplay... so i hope u guys can understand any of it fine!! ........Be Harsh

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^^what was that fam..seen betta from you..but o well just a flow...flow i wasnt really flowin...and it was to short to be consider a verse...i know you where just playin arround though

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Itz Coopa Bang bitch and I done made a transition,
I smell what ya hattaz cookin but ya aint smellin what im wrippin,
The net fixin to burn cuz Bang in the buildin....




Me fallin off,start Trippin and slackin,
Nope that will never happen Just like the Pope Rappin......

yea man........ theres only like two good bars in that.... and it doesnt really feel like a rap...... i was feelin it alil bit, but its too short to get much out of it........ aight shit tho..... keep it up

return da favor fam..thnx...^^ya

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FREE AGENT

Itz Coopa Bang bitch and I done made a transition,
I smell what ya hattaz cookin but ya aint smellin what im wrippin,
The net fixin to burn cuz Bang in the buildin....




Me fallin off,start Trippin and slackin,
Nope that will never happen Just like the Pope Rappin......

hahaha......... lmao....... anyways..... i think its alil better than wat u sayin, but i wasnt in the best state of mind, lmao...... but its only a quick 8 that took me about 4 minutes..... i dont like usin excuses, but juss tryna put it in persepective i guess

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^^think you slick like a bird...dont you fuxjustaword...malak is you...lol....anywayz feedback on my open mic fam.....

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FREE AGENT

Itz Coopa Bang bitch and I done made a transition,
I smell what ya hattaz cookin but ya aint smellin what im wrippin,
The net fixin to burn cuz Bang in the buildin....




Me fallin off,start Trippin and slackin,
Nope that will never happen Just like the Pope Rappin......

^^^ hahah......... u shutup ..... i was on that by mistake.... i actually havent used it in awhile, anyways..... luckily i didnt show the better alias....
I Was Tryna Cover Shit Up

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it was ok but u still need to practice on your lines

^^i unno wat that really means........ but thanx i might as well write sumthin better in here sooner or later

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yeh kid you replied tomine so I have to drop this in yours

Got enough canny flows to stuff panty holes and have girl skipping?
While the world slipping into a comma of drama politics dripping
Just a newspaper whose pages leave crews in rages like headlines
Dead rhymes can’t thread minds and for a lot of cats its bedtime
Chase thunder like a base runner they try tag me out
Before I get to home plate, roam great never lag about

^^^^^ uhhhh ok??? y are u postin this here???? anyways..... i dont feel like uppin this shit, but eh

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