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12-14-04, 09:08 AM | #1 | ||||
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beef in hip hop(toy soilderspt2)
IP: 8D8F 2E5A
its insane what beef in hip-hop as gotten 2
but who are we talk we contrubite to it so much now chossin sides in beefs is a must/ i think to myself well it ever cease well there be peace/ between jay-z and nas what would have happened if bigge and pac/ were still here if some one didnt end there carrer we say we just reflections like a mirror/ wouldnt ya straighten ya tie if it was crooked just look at where 50 and ja rule took it/ thearten there innocent children ja thearten to kill em/ he brought in EMs daughter into the mix shadyaftermath vs the inc throwin around diss after diss / then the source comes along and try to exspose eminem say hes racist they coudnt lie back and just fuckin take it/ they keep callin eachother out to scrap nowadays everyone got a strap/ it was a tragedy how we lost 2pac no one really saw it coming who would of thought/ that beef could esclate to this level so much drama that'll now never be settle/ a few months later b.i.g got killed some one had a weapon conceled/ decided to use it no people use rap like a drug they abuse it/ this is gettin way to crazy to sit back and just watch so if u got something aganist someone for no reason just stop/ it aint worth losien everything over maybe after u read this we'll get a litlle closer to end all of the feuds between crews and get clouser/
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12-14-04, 11:12 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: CA3D 63F5
uppin 4 feed back
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12-15-04, 04:44 AM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 5EDD FA7C
uppin...feedback people...
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12-15-04, 07:39 AM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 2366 E7B1
yeah i like it, but im in 2 minds bout dis shit, and i know which side im gonna take dude.
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12-15-04, 03:50 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 6804 D41F
upin 4 somefeed back ...
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12-15-04, 03:58 PM | #6 | ||||
Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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IP: A190 A400
not bad............... not the greatest on tha site, but not bad
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12-15-04, 04:30 PM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: C3B8 0828
good but not good enough to be part 2 to one of ems songs!! work on spelling and it would be easier to understand!! also try to make the lines have the same amount of sylabols<(spell)!! it would flow so much betta if you did!! keep postin up yah skill!!!
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12-26-04, 08:16 PM | #8 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: FD58 E3D6
structure :thumbdown: but good...one of the best ive seen from you...i did a like toy soldier text me too but thats not bad...keep elevating and ask me if you ever need help and shit
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12-26-04, 08:52 PM | #9 | |||
Im..Nasty..
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IP: 12BB 668E
Didnt like it, why make a toy soldiers pt 2, you had no fight in it, you just used most rappers, or well Eminems, concept on hip hop.., this that and pac n big in every song.
The flow was horrible, I dont think it rhymed once. Weak
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12-26-04, 08:55 PM | #10 | ||||||
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IP: 5D2B CB2A
ummm i liked it not all of it wus rhymein tho n iv seen betta structure but probs i liked it
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12-26-04, 08:55 PM | #11 | |||||
(X) CeEding all Expectations
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IP: B737 5925
lol man seen a hell of a lot better ....u cud hae done alot better sum of ur words didnt rhyme alrite just elevate,,,,,u kan do better aigght.........................
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12-26-04, 09:54 PM | #12 | |||||||
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IP: 5671 DBDD
was wack you really need to work on flow vocab and metaphores you just rapped names thats wack work on your shit you need alot of practice
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12-26-04, 10:03 PM | #13 | |||||||
Bow Chicka Bow Wow
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IP: FEFC E273
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