some was alil forced......... like the rhyming..... but overall pretty good.... i say u should cut the denny's line and in a few places the wording is alil weird in the first half of the verse.... ah, no wordplay but it was more of a story, so thats ok, but u might wanna get alil more creative with some of ur lines.. pretty good drop overall

7/10

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