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Imagine. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-10-05 10:03 PM.

Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-10-05 10:09 PM.

Aiight, look.

Kor needs a life & you know it's sad when
His IQ is the same as his post per day average
Kid excess baggage, he's wack & the truth's cold
A veteran? nah, far from it man... ya just old
Couldn't spit fire with flamin' Cheetos in your sandwich
& it's sad how ya whole revolves around ya band..........width
Kor's a fat fuck who only types, but no one's seen
Sits roun' drinking yoo-hoo to be less of an Ovaltine
Dude's on the road to nowhere & he's riding shotgun
Did a search for your dopest verse, but you ain't got none!

Later.

In A Battle Against This 1 Man Army...Kid Has No Fellow Soldiers...
He's 2 Soft, So I'll Dismantle His Neck 4rm His Shoulders..
Since He's A "Gangsta Walrus" I'll Make Sure I'll "Seal"His Defeat..
Wants Ta Be A Professional Rapper,But Got Fired Before His Producer Created A Beat..
..........Kids A Stalker Imed Me Harrasin Fa A Battle..
He Doesn't Want "Beef",Knows Tha Outcome Would Be Tha Death Of This Cattle...
Locations Close Ta Tha "Frisco",So Alreadi He Knows Who Won't Get A Win..
He Stays In Tha "Bay Area"Wea Its Infested With Homosexual Men..
If Had A Sever Case Of Diahrea,He Wouldn't Have Hot Shit..
Not Straight Nor Gay But In Tha Middle Like Tha Religion Agnostic..

**Expla's**
His Aim Name GangstaWalrus
Wants Ta Be A Proffesional Rapper
Imed Me Harrasin Me
Frisco San Fransisco 49ers Wont Get A Win Thiss Year
Live In Tha Bay Area Which Is Close Ta Frisco
His Religion Is Agnostic,Which Means He's In Tha Middle With Tha Belief Of God

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Damn I Fucked Mih Strukture Up...................



In A Battle Against This 1 Man Army...Kid Has No Fellow Soldiers...
He's 2 Soft, So I'll Dismantle His Neck 4rm His Shoulders..
Since He's A "Gangsta Walrus" I'll Make Sure I'll "Seal"His Defeat..
Wants Ta Be A Professional Rapper,But Got Fired Before His Producer Created A Beat..
..........Kids A Stalker Imed Me Harrasin Fa A Battle..
He Doesn't Want "Beef",Knows Tha Outcome Would Be Tha Death Of This Cattle...
Locations Close Ta Tha "Frisco",So Alreadi He Knows Who Won't Get A Win..
He Stays In Tha "Bay Area"Wea Its Infested With Homosexual Men..
If Had A Sever Case Of Diahrea,He Wouldn't Have Hot Shit..
Not Straight Nor Gay But In Tha Middle Like Tha Religion Agnostic

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Voted For: Kordozar

lol, VERY VERY VERY CLOSE BATTLE AND IM FUCKIN SURPRISED.
Kordozor man u did not put on ur best performance at all...man dat is disappointin

punches-Imagine- he killed u dere man
personals- K- he had the nice personals, his whole verse was personals...lol
vocab- none of yall, work on dat K
wordplay-K- had the better wordplay, every word flowed
structure- imagine had dis. he had the way betta verse structure wise. it was very fuckin wasy to read, but ur structure was sumwhere else man.

but none da less K got da victory. nice try ROOK, but ur imaginary took u to far. no hate but he beat u.
v/ K

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actually, his personals were fake.

i had better wordplay, he didn't have any.

flow is not the same as wordplay man.


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you did use fake personals.

i don't live in San Francisco.

i don't want to be a professional rapper.

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Voted For: Kordozar

Both had good flow and structure in their verse, Kordozar had slightly better vocab though. I'll give you the full breakdown...

Kordozar

In A Battle Against This 1 Man Army...Kid Has No Fellow Soldiers...
He's 2 Soft, So I'll Dismantle His Neck 4rm His Shoulders..
^first line is cool, 2nd bleh

Since He's A "Gangsta Walrus" I'll Make Sure I'll "Seal"His Defeat..
Wants Ta Be A Professional Rapper,But Got Fired Before His Producer Created A Beat..
^hehe,good good!

..........Kids A Stalker Imed Me Harrasin Fa A Battle..
He Doesn't Want "Beef",Knows Tha Outcome Would Be Tha Death Of This Cattle...
^2nd line kinda played but still nice though

Locations Close Ta Tha "Frisco",So Alreadi He Knows Who Won't Get A Win..
He Stays In Tha "Bay Area"Wea Its Infested With Homosexual Men..
^lolz, funny...

If Had A Sever Case Of Diahrea,He Wouldn't Have Hot Shit..
Not Straight Nor Gay But In Tha Middle Like Tha Religion Agnostic..
^nice closer

Had some nice creative punches n personals in there, solid drop!


Imagine.
Kor needs a life & you know it's sad when
His IQ is the same as his post per day average
^funny opener

Kid excess baggage, he's wack & the truth's cold
A veteran? nah, far from it man... ya just old
^first line's bleh,2nd's good

Couldn't spit fire with flamin' Cheetos in your sandwich
& it's sad how ya whole revolves around ya band..........width
^hehe, nice one!

Kor's a fat fuck who only types, but no one's seen
Sits roun' drinking yoo-hoo to be less of an Ovaltine
^not really feeling this one actually...

Dude's on the road to nowhere & he's riding shotgun
Did a search for your dopest verse, but you ain't got none!
^uhm, guess it'll do

Kinda fell of in the end...too bad...cause you had some funny stuff in there, nice punches n personals, vocab might be lil better but it's good man!

Still my vote goes to Kordozar cause i was feeling his verse a lil more, was straight from beginning till end where you fell off a lil near the end...Try to keep spitting hot fire throughout whole verse, was hard one to decide...no hate...

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