Ayo If ya Feelin How im feelin rii Bout Now Then Jus Tell Me You Wit me
yo yo

Ma pain and depression just cannot be dis-missed
Its sad but its tru that I go thru all this shit
All the sadness and the misery puts me in the pits of hell
Many people know my childhood didn’t go to well
But still they have to go to other people and tell
It just drives me crazy, how ppl think this just a phase I be (in)
Right now my current lifestyle is just a tragic sin
Evry nite I pray 4 better Dayz,
but the trouble never goes away It always stays
Evry time b4 I go 2 sleep I worry dat silence will come & creep
It will b ma last breath da very next mornin ma fam will find me dead because I’ve gone 2 rest
Now thru of all the drama misery and stress
And on that final day when I enter the gates
The lord will be there – there to set me straight
Wonder if death will ever become my fate
Or if I can just stay on earth with my people and wait
Up there they wait for my arrival while I have survival
Rite now, I currently have no denial,
I admit all the anger inside jus come n spirals
Right now I’m so pissed I rarely see the point to smile
While, all the while, some ppl jus reading ma file
Bcuz The Life I been Livin Is Jus filled With Ak'z 47'z and tech'z
If feelin How Im Feelin Then Jus Throw Up Ya Respects



Plz Drop Some Feed

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Cmon Yall Pplz Lets Get some Comments And Feedback Up In Here

i think its cool i'll say
8/10,fasho

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Hey yall vote on dis please:
vote on dis on to yall,c'mon RV make it happen:
me vs hangman


TWISTED GOVERNMENT
First da white house den da world

Thanx Mayne./..........................Uppin And Im Lookin for Some Feed Not a rating But thanx n e wayz

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FAVORS WILL BE RETURNED OR MY NAME AINT .......................well you dont Need to Know what My Name is So

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Come Yall We Uppin Up In This Bitch So Give me some Goddamnit................Uppin

wud up King aight lets start wit da flow it was a lil off on sum place your lines was short and den some was real long which was why the flow was messed up nice piece doe nice topic could of showed more emotion but it was but it was decent ill give it a 7/10

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aight man..this was a nice drop.....the concept was good...and it was real...which i loved about it....was really feelin the pain in there....wot u been through and stuff...and tlkin bout ya life n stuff...overall this was good to read...the only thing i will say is tht ur structure was off...u need to keep ya lines about the same lenght..or at least the bars......people will enjoy it more then cos they can catch a flow n makes it easier to read...but u'll pick up on tht...anyway.....part from tht..good job..ama keep a lookout for more stuff from u...keep em comin man..pz

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Living Legendz

I Promise Alot...But I Deliver Alot More...

...Topicals...

What Is Life?

Dark Disguise

It was, down to Earth, unlike some of the plots and concepts that other emcee's have been trying to come up with. It was straightforward and it worked well to your advantage, if anything my advice would be to work on your structure, that way your flow will come into play alot bettter. Then, you won't have such a jumbled verse. Good job.

stop rappin cuz...dis was garbage as hell...retire, fag

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SO DONE WIT RV

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Mayne When You Stop Dick rYdin Then Ill Retire ....................which is neva

Ill Post Some links Now

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171706

and / or

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171262

Aii We Uppin Up in This MOFO ............................. Drop Some Feed And Plz If any Suggestionz Too.

ay...dis shit is pretty hot my nigga...i gives it a 7/10...ay, keep dis shit up and i'll be lookin for yo shit 4real...~1~

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