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01-12-05, 01:58 AM | #1 | |||||||
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Song For My Girl (Best Love Song You'll See on OM)
IP: 7358 77ED
Uncontrolable, unconditional, and deep love for my dear Ashley
Swearin i see a halo above you every time you walk past me You the only one who can make me happy if you ask me you're amazing Maybe crazy but when i'm with you it's really hard to stay me My heart was aching for you baby my one and only girl I swear to everything and my life that you're everything n my entire world My stomach twirls it spins it twists it turns When i'm with you my hearts stiff when i'm not it burns At first i wasn'y sure if it was love but now i'm certain You're perfect and i know we was put together for a purpose Without you i would've never even found my way to the surface You were worth it worth the pain worth the searchin You that special person my significant other Love i wouldn't know what it mean without you i really meant i love her My life my lover no one i see above her we go togther like 2 turtle doves And for ever always carved in my heart...Unconditional Love Unconditional Love which stays carved in my heart With these words i put into rhymes they are art The art of love you're my present who came from above And bein with you i can never get enough I want you to listen i'll never leave you to be a rap musician The story will end hapilly never twisted me not lovin you is fiction I have visions of us kissin bein happy for the rest of our lives And the love i have for you can't be expressed with words or rhymes Words can't define my feelings i love you more than i can explain Before you came i could never see clear through all of this rain But i have a clear view even more clear when i'm near you I'm here to keep your life happy i'm sincere too I fear to have people gone that are important You've always been there and i thank you for it With you problems are easy sortin out my love is not deductible our love put together has always been undestructible I thought me bein with you was only a fantasy Now we're together forever can't wait for the future family And i know a lot of dreams have been shattered But now that i'm with you them things don't even matter Unconditional Love which stays carved in my heart With these words i put into rhymes they are art The art of love you're my present who came from above And bein with you i can never get enough I know i've done stupid things and tears fell from your eyes But all that is over now let's put that aside True love is hard to find but mine has been found Never knew what love was before we went out So many lifeless screams, so many untrue dreams Now we're together i finally know what feminen means You only can feed my needs of happiness Before this i was never having bliss Love, having this is heavin I swear that day i asked you my palms was sweatin That supposed to be lettin you know how nervous i was It's crazy, finally happiness is constantly serving us Never hurting us but only constant pleasure X marks the spot and i've found my treasure I've wrote so many love letters but never containin this stuff Forever always will i have Unconditional love Unconditional Love which stays carved in my heart With these words i put into rhymes they are art The art of love you're my present who came from above And bein with you i can never get enough
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01-12-05, 02:09 AM | #2 | |||||||
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01-12-05, 12:03 PM | #3 | |||||||
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i need some feedback people!!!!! damn no one gives any feedback.....annoying shit!
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01-12-05, 01:41 PM | #4 | ||||
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thats was preety good...good emotion i worte somethin for a girl that i was datin and when i read it to her she got so happy and cried...if u havent already u should show it to her yall probaly get somethin ...got rhymin to structre was good..the hook was put together well... return the favor in one of mine...
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01-12-05, 11:29 PM | #5 | |||||||
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nah man i'm recordin that shit! lol thanx for the feedback....i'll leave some feed on yours in a bit
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01-12-05, 11:31 PM | #6 | |||||||
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thanx
IP: 7358 77ED
nah man i'm recordin that shit! lol thanx for the feedback....i'll leave some feed on yours in a bit
uppin for more feedback
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01-13-05, 10:07 AM | #7 | ||||||
This is my first post!
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IP: 0825 899A
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Yo dawg that was some emotional verse, good hook and rhyming do what you got to do. |
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01-13-05, 10:52 AM | #8 | |||||
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IP: 964F D870
fuck yall pussy ass bitches...this shit was garbage...retire
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