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Check in by: 01-16-05 at 04:03 PM

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xOverdozEx has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-05 04:03 PM.

You On The High Way To Hell Buh Yoh There Aint No Rest-Stops
Dawg Ya Can't Turn Back Now Just Because This Thread's Red-Hot
Ya Cant Spit I Aint Ever Seen You Throw A Real Direct-Shot
You Never Wanna 'Start' Unless It's On Your Computer Desktop!!!!
But Lets-Not Go Ahead And Take This Battle To Drastice-Measures
You 'Playin A Part' You Cant Handle So You Needa Get Ya Act-Together!
You A Whack-Contendor... You Dont Belong Like The Ugly-Duckling
If You Had The Hands Of God, You Still Wouldnt Be Touching-Nothing
Im Just-Disgusting So You Gotta Try Ya Absolute Best-To-Win
So You'll Probaly 'Pussy' Out Coz I Know You Got That Estrogen
You Wont Beat Me Homie Unless You Can Pull An Amazing-Stunt
Coz To Me.... You Just Another One Of My Faceless-Chumps
You Shouldnt Have Accepted This If You Cant Take-A-Punch
But The Only Time You 'Serve' Kids Is When You Make-They-Lunch!!!!

Get At Me....

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.MictoriouS. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-05 06:22 PM.

..Ya verse is Garnished-Junk..
'Take That Trash Back Where You Found It'..like 'Reversing The Service Of A Garbage-Dump' !!

..These fist gonna Grind-Sum-More Cuz my punches comin "Back To Back"
Like I "Tied A Knot In His Spinal-Cord"..

..Ima Rest-This-Phony; and leave Ovadose "Witness To His Own Death"
Like "Resurected Murder Victims In Testamony"..!!

..He's Already Dosed Heavy-Leaded' How Do I Know? Cause He Name-Name-Already-Says-It
Spit Some More? Nah. Your name already says how The-Battle-Ended !!

I see 'small fries' in 'Super-Sizes', but nobody knows who this chick or Guy-Is,
So i'll 'Jam-Over Ya Awarness With A Sexual Indentity' and leave His 'Gender Full Of Surprises' !!

G/Luck

Uppin for some votes .. People ;]]
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peacesss

Voted For: .MictoriouS.

overdoze..........
You On The High Way To Hell Buh Yoh There Aint No Rest-Stops
Dawg Ya Can't Turn Back Now Just Because This Thread's Red-Hot
nope
Ya Cant Spit I Aint Ever Seen You Throw A Real Direct-Shot
You Never Wanna 'Start' Unless It's On Your Computer Desktop!!!!
nice try
But Lets-Not Go Ahead And Take This Battle To Drastice-Measures
You 'Playin A Part' You Cant Handle So You Needa Get Ya Act-Together!
ehhh...couldve been written much betta
You A Whack-Contendor... You Dont Belong Like The Ugly-Duckling
If You Had The Hands Of God, You Still Wouldnt Be Touching-Nothing
damn that was played
Im Just-Disgusting So You Gotta Try Ya Absolute Best-To-Win
So You'll Probaly 'Pussy' Out Coz I Know You Got That Estrogen
nope........
Coz To Me.... You Just Another One Of My Faceless-Chumps
You Shouldnt Have Accepted This If You Cant Take-A-Punch
But The Only Time You 'Serve' Kids Is When You Make-They-Lunch!!!!
best bar......................still sucked

2/10.......elevate alot......

Mictorious

..Ya verse is Garnished-Junk..
'Take That Trash Back Where You Found It'..like 'Reversing The Service Of A Garbage-Dump' !!
lol....that was good...nice opener...fix tha structure
..Ima Rest-This-Phony; and leave Ovadose "Witness To His Own Death"
Like "Resurected Murder Victims In Testamony"..!!
nice.......had no flow......and fix tha structure
..He's Already Dosed Heavy-Leaded' How Do I Know? Cause He Name-Name-Already-Says-It
Spit Some More? Nah. Your name already says how The-Battle-Ended !!
ehhhh...na...repition is bad...not a good flow...bad struct.
I see 'small fries' in 'Super-Sizes', but nobody knows who this chick or Guy-Is,
So i'll 'Jam-Over Ya Awarness With A Sexual Indentity' and leave His 'Gender Full Of Surprises' !!
holy fucking shit...ladies n gentlemen...thats a wrap

\V/-mictorious for too many good punches...lol...get at me on aim for help wit ya structure man...i think u need it

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Voted For: .MictoriouS.


Openor=Mic Good Punch
Structure=Tie Both Good Stukture
Punches=Mic,Good Vokab In Ya Punches
Vokab=Mic ^^ Explained it
Personals=None
Closer=Mic Good Closer And Punch Cus..............

Overall Mic Took Thiss With Stringer Punches Vokab And Hiss Shit Wass Hott.........

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Voted For: .MictoriouS.

over.....

basically the only thing good about your verse was your multis and your structure.....you had 2 decent bars in the middle but the rest were wack and didnt hit very well.....no hate...you have potential....just elevate.....

Mic........
work on your structure man....its fucked up and hard to read...i could see someone voting against you just for that........but your had pretty good vocab....your punches hit harder.....you had better concepts through your whole verse......

i thought you both came pretty weak....not a very fun battle to read...but mic got this with better and more complex punches.............

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Voted For: xOverdozEx

Booooooo@this shit. Mic, man you have terrible structure, I don't even think your shit rhymed. And even if it did it was supremely stretched. OD, your shit was ehhhhhh to the max. You focus too much on multis and it takes away from punches, drastically. Boith gotta elevate and read more battles. Another thing I would say is to use much much much more personals cuz they seriously lacked. But.,

v-OD

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Voted For: xOverdozEx

this battle was close at 1st but then pulled in the opposite direction 4 overdose:
opener: both
vocab: ill
structure: overdose
multis:both
closer: overdose
the reason y overdose won my vote was b'cuz he was direct & str8 2 the point wit his punches; while ill's lines were stretched & left me having 2 find his rhyme
make sure 2 return the favor

Voted For: .MictoriouS.

lockdown killed u dawg....better punches and shit...ok vocab for both..flow was aiight....no hate...return the favour in my om....peace...

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