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01-24-05, 03:53 AM | #1 | ||||
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Sanity Lost
IP: 3240 794D
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173264
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173295 To my girl/ex:I know we had our problems and you couldnt take it now more but please girl i want you to know i love you So many Things were promised - i wanted to Show ya the Ring- Slowly we Bring the end - all because ya didnt Owe me a Thing- My Souls Crushed cuz of my debts - Im sorry i didnt Hold Much- Its a Gold Rush with the warmth of ya body to my Cold Touch- Missin ya Smile n ya beatiful voice - I wish i could Listen Awhile- Always Diggin my Style but to you im now nothin but Shit in a Pile- Wrong in Position - i realize that but its to late to be On the Attention- Now ya Gone n im Missin you so im writin this Song for the Friction- All will Be is friends - i know we miscommunicated with fights Oftenly- But Possibly we will be later in life but please accept my Apology- To my Peeps:Yo to my mothafuckin dawgs i know i brushed yall off more than i should of but deep inside i wanted to ride man...but it was the family guy talkin to me lol I know to yall i changed and i wasnt Around for Shit - But i was tryin to be a man stayin Down for my Bitch- Always had ya back it wasnt like i would Leave ya to Die- It was hard for me i had no tears - I now Bleed in my Eyes- We was brothers and yall know that - never get it Twisted- If i heard some1 talkin out they neck they was gettin Fisted- Listen it's very hard sometimes to keep Things in your Life- But i tried my best to have it all but it kept Bringin me Strife- I got to the point i couldnt take it and i wanted to End it All- But every time i put the ghat to my head Friends would Call- So yeah i will admitt it yall - my woman did Soften Me- 2 u all i got ya backs 4ever just please accept my Apology-
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01-25-05, 03:16 AM | #2 | |||||
...Simply The Best
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IP: 3240 794D
feelin this shit here...shit was dope...it was deep too...nice flow, creativity, etc...nice drop man...9/10
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01-25-05, 01:23 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
thanks dawg - uppin this - dont sleep on this shit
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01-25-05, 03:31 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
uppin this shit again----------------------------------------
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..The Establishment.. Battles Flamin Barz vs Scene0-0..need votes Armada Da 1287 vs Flamin Barz0-1...i'm up Open Mics Sanity Lost Twizted Government Diss |
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01-26-05, 01:25 AM | #5 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: AA11 D51C
good solid drop, emotion is nice. good structure. keep dropping
return the feed. ~inside the mind of a maniac~ |
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01-27-05, 01:42 AM | #6 | ||||
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IP: 0825 899A
thanks man - uppin this here - i want more feed back on this
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..The Establishment.. Battles Flamin Barz vs Scene0-0..need votes Armada Da 1287 vs Flamin Barz0-1...i'm up Open Mics Sanity Lost Twizted Government Diss |
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