can any voters..explain?...2 more to get removed...

n paramik....shut the fuck up hatin..id merk the fuck outta ya

uppin 4 sum well explained votes

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Voted For: Empire

Voted for Empire

Kay to be honest neither impressed me .

Only thing I Like was Empires verse due to he had a more serious approach to it his punches were hard in some spots humerous though

Flow given it to Empire

Tstorm ya verse was ight but ya punches were more comical i didnt see anything serious in it at all not even so much as callin him a bitch or w/e mosly jus dissin free agent n fat bitches nah not feelin it

all n all decent battle, gotta vote for sumone

Not Hatin , Jus Votin

uppin this battle....
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Voted For: Tstorm

there's not much 2 explain dis a 6 bar battle..but i felt storm shit more it sound like u were tryin da get a lil personal and empire u was just talkin bout some other shit fam and some of ya lines were short then long it doesn't flow rite...

opener-empire da secod line was creative...storm shit was cool but not really hard
structure-storm..
punchlines-a tie
creativity-empire
flow-storm
multis-nun
wordplay-nun
personals-storm ima give it 2 me cuzz he tried and u didn't empire
enjoyed-basically ya'll were a tie but i think storm takes dis by a lil bit cuzz his verse was neat and battlin is personal and he had 1

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^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: Tstorm

ight diz was an ok battle not really 2 many lines sttod out:

opener: tstorm
vocab: both
punches: both
personals: tstorm
structure: tstorm
closer: tstrom
da reason tstrom won my vote is b'cuz he came a lil bit harder & hit empire wit more personals; empire & tstorm u 2 need 2 elevate more in ur rhymes next time

Voted For: Tstorm

Empire:
I'll shoot dis bitch evry week, cos hez subscribed 2 my magazine..
Cuz frankly tstorms linez r neva eva eyed, not even by mabeline..
Very nice opener Empire, good wording & nice flow
Fracture ur spine, and put ma point 2 ya bullshit facts......
Cuz hiz lines culdnt b str8...
If they were formed up on bicycle racks!....
nice set up but not very effective
T's-Storm's r light, they just feeble and ghostly showers.....
An shit, u culdnt elevate ur skills, blessed wit Supermans powers!
an aight closer, i expected you to come up wit something more effective tho, the first half was just right, the superman half was wack..

Seemed like you rushed this battle a lil'.. however, this is pretty decent for a 3 bars.. you have to complete ya punches and make them effective, you start ya bars off really good but end it wit a terrible second half..

Tstorm:
no life or day-job, this guys on here almost 24hours a day
heard the saying..but in your case "hard work dosent pay"
Best opener- nice personal and set up..
i heard the rumours...but u really are a hated figure on rv..
vet?..guy has to upp his own thread, and still remains free!
^^another nice personal.. nice punch lol
ya lyrical skillz out-balanced, like a fat chick on a see-saw
standing still on a golf course..this guy couldnt met-a-fore!
this didn't rhyme unless you have an accent.. but other than that nice meta in the second half.. first half nice meta also...

aight i feel this battle was a lil' too short but Tstorm wit the bars you spit, you took the battle cuz you came harder, had some nice metaphors.. nice personals, and the second bar was a really good punch and personal.. Overall, you came a lil' harder than Empire.. that's why you took it..
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