Battle Rules:
Crew Battle
.SM Vs. CST.
10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-09-05 at 02:34 PM

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Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-06-05 03:11 PM.

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J.R. Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-06-05 03:31 PM.

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Dislocate Your Spinal Chord When I Break In Half Your "Vertebre"
Then Release Yellow Fluids From My Body To Your Face As I "Urinate"
My Bar's hitz Your Brain & Paralyzes Your Body “Functions”
Stick Your Spine In Your Rectum & Put It All Together Like A Sentence “Conjunction”
Leave You With Partial Thought Process Like Waking Up At A Earlytime
Put Your Brains On The Ground So You Literally Have A "DirtyMind”
You Want My Passwor....So You Can At Least Feel Like A Lyrical Genius
Metaphoric Phrases Kill Your Brain Cells Like Bitches Sucking Way Too Much “Penis”
Blow Your Brains Through Your Mouth So You Can Speak Ya Mind”
And Scare You Like 8th Grade Dropouts When I “Release Tha 9”......

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Voted For: J.R. Freeze

this battle was not even close on the real here's my opinion on it:
opener: cst
punches: cst
personals: cst
multis: cst
structure: sm
closer: cst
j.r. & his crew cst just came harder & hit skriptz & his crew sm with alot more punches; skrpitz just need 2 elevate in his rhymes more & direct more punches at ur opponent the next time

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im not even gonna say nuttin...just gettin that bullshit vote removed

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Voted For: Skriptz

skriptz................

This is a crew battle son, in this battle your not going to last
I better get ready cause its time…

Quote:
Originally Posted by J.R. Freeze
to murk ur lame ass
decent here....i like how you used things he said....hit good....7/10

I’ll grab your damn punches and form them into a ball
Cuz once SM destroys Cold Steel your…

Quote:
Originally Posted by J.R. Freeze
(crew is gonna fall)
decent.....hit pretty good.....7/10

Your not on my level kid, why do I have to battle you?
The time you only feel good is when you get accepted to a wack crew
nice personal.....7/10

Heard you was a redneck and a herb, but what difference does that make?
Only time you serving up some punches, is when they come on a plate
hit good as well.....7/10

I’ll destroy this hoe with weak punches, who here wants to make a bet?
Claims that he’s rusty, when his skills are that bad to get there yet
nice closer....hit good.....8/10


overall..........36/50


JR freeze............
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Dislocate Your Spinal Chord When I Break In Half Your "Vertebre"
Then Release Yellow Fluids From My Body To Your Face As I "Urinate"
ehh ok...i wasnt feelin it that much though....good vocab...6/10

My Bar's hitz Your Brain & Paralyzes Your Body “Functions”
Stick Your Spine In Your Rectum & Put It All Together Like A Sentence “Conjunction”
nice....7/10

Leave You With Partial Thought Process Like Waking Up At A Earlytime
Put Your Brains On The Ground So You Literally Have A "DirtyMind”
good wordplay here....7/10

You Want My Passwor....So You Can At Least Feel Like A Lyrical Genius
Metaphoric Phrases Kill Your Brain Cells Like Bitches Sucking Way Too Much “Penis”
blowjob lines= played.....5/10

Blow Your Brains Through Your Mouth So You Can Speak Ya Mind”
And Scare You Like 8th Grade Dropouts When I “Release Tha 9”......
nice wordplay here...i was feelin it.....8/10

overall.........33/50


yea both had pretty good verses....but i had to go with skriptz because his punches just hit a lot harder.....jr had good vocab and wordplay....but some of his bars werent as good as the others.....whereas skriptz stayed consistent with his in his whole verse......skriptz also had good personals.....add some personals to your verse JR and this would have been closer.....PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR SKRIPTZ......link in sig....thanks

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Voted For: Skriptz

Your not on my level kid, why do I have to battle you?
The time you only feel good is when you get accepted to a wack crew
decent personal in this..7/10

Heard you was a redneck and a herb, but what difference does that make?
Only time you serving up some punches, is when they come on a plate
not very good........5/10
I’ll destroy this hoe with weak punches, who here wants to make a bet?
Claims that he’s rusty, when his skills are that bad to get there yet
..ehh..typo, but i see what u was doing 7/10




Leave You With Partial Thought Process Like Waking Up At A Earlytime
Put Your Brains On The Ground So You Literally Have A "DirtyMind”
....see ya concept but poor set up..poor delivery
You Want My Passwor....So You Can At Least Feel Like A Lyrical Genius
Metaphoric Phrases Kill Your Brain Cells Like Bitches Sucking Way Too Much “Penis”
..nice vocab in this bar but punch didnt connect..5/10
Blow Your Brains Through Your Mouth So You Can Speak Ya Mind”
And Scare You Like 8th Grade Dropouts When I “Release Tha 9”......
no...very played...both lines..5/10


skriptz came short and sweet JR came congested and played
v/ Skript

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no hate please return

Voted For: Skriptz

good battle from both sides...

JR ya verse was good..nice punches 8/10..vocab was lackin just a bit 4/10..personals were aight 6/10..Structure was bad i thought 3/10...multis came ok you used them well 7/10...metas were light from your side hommie 5/10...Opener was weak 5/10...closer was ok 7/10...coulda done betta fam...overall: 40/70

Skriptz dope drop...Punches were crazy 9/10...structure was good 8/10...personals was aight nice way to use his words against him 8/10...multis were lackin i thought 3/10...metas came weak in ya drop 5/10...opener was good 7/10...closer was good also 7/10...overall:47/70

v/skriptz

Voted For: J.R. Freeze

i was gonna give this one to skriptz because i read freeze's last and i thought it was that bad. then i went back and realized that skriptz didn't have any punches at all. and by the way, the quotes weren't working guy. and why would punch be served on a plate? anyways i wasn't really feelin freeze's graphic punches and jokes but at least he had punches ya know. skriptz verse was a little neater but structure ain't gonna do it for ya.

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