Most of the tracks I record are just rough copies... I have no equipment at my place its all at my homies but here it is... Vocals where maibe too high lemme know what yall think of this

To The Test
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/draxemusic.htm

or

Hi-Fi
http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=2097006&q=Hi


MP3
http://www.soundclick.com/util/Down....cfm?ID=2097006



and as far as feedback goes... I will drop more but :
Link #1: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=176953
Link #2:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=176963
Link #3:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177195

peace


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Ay yo - thanks for the feed man....

Aight, beat is nice. Kinda errie like that. Flow is smooth on this, I like it. You kinda sound like Shyne in this man. Like a early-Shyne. Lyrics are good with this man, the second verse is alot better than the first. Mos def feelin the lyrics on that verse. Couple lines where you dropped the beat a bit, but its a smooth beat, so its a little easier to fall off on those. Good looks though man, stay up mos def. 1

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dam shit was pretty decent....at first i listened to it and was like wtf...then once i listened again i was damn....

nice shit...could have raised your vocal just a lil tiny bit.....
also work on your breather control....and this shit would be even more doper...
and try to speak up becuase i couldnt understand somewords....lol
dope shit tho
the chorus is mad catchy..lol

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yeah thanks for the feedback yall, I appreciate it


good looks


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ugghhhhhhhhhhhhh (master P style)

im feelin the beat.........yea early-shyne 4sho..
damn dis shit is raw kid...lyrical content is dope...shit feels so underground...like its comin off some rare ass mixtape...damn im feelin dis...i dunno what else 2 say man..
-8.5/10

Peace
-AC
P.s - Join The Jury.....or hit me up on AIM=Acuity2k5

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yes join the jury, shit is hella hot. Beat is hot, and you got an actual style unlike a lot of heads on RV. matter of fact pm me and ill give u the crew. Join and ill give u a spot in the crew battle.

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thanks for the feedback for sure mayne,


Draxe

Peace

nice beat u came very smooth & laid back on this 1 i like da overall quality it was good

Typing as I listen: Wow, props for knowledge and confidence in your Vocal Range. Rhymescheme was pretty nice, your presence on the mic complimented it substantially. Lyrics were pretty solid. Nothing flashy - but def didn't bore me. beat works well and you work well on it. You remind me of Killa Priest as both of you have husky voices that work extremely well for tracks where you utilize it, which in this case you def did. I think a better mic might bring up the sound of your annunciation. You're having the same problem I am where you rhyme in a range that your mic def isn't optimized for so some of your lyrics sound mushed together, but I can hear that you actually speak into the mic with annunciation - mic just isn't picking it up. Beat was solid man and it fit you really well. All in all a pretty good track. Shoulda been longer. I was listening to some of your other uploads too man, I think you're one of the more polished emcees on RV, real smooth transitions and presence on the mic is no joke. Easy to tell you were rappin before you got on a rap board. That's something that's rare as shit. Def props man.

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word up Doomsday, yeah I appreciate the strong and constructive feedback and critiscism that you dropped homie.... at the moment I am using a Shure SM58 Dynamic Microphone wich is at my homies place, and he has an Alto L-6 pre-amp or something... im saving up for equipment of my own and I will probably let him keep using my microphone... I just gotta have the $$ and also find out what mic will best suit my voice...

ima add you to my aim aight, and maibe well talk about some ish, you really seem to know your stuff dawg,


thanks again

Draxe


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^^yeah man, I'd def be down for that. I'd be up for some collabs too man if you got open spots (which I see you do ). As far as your vocals - man, I got one word...MXL990!! It's a condenser and for us with bass in the tubes it's one of the few mics that'll pick up every word (south of a $300 SM86). For $60 bucks man you DEF can't go wrong. Cost about as much as a used SM58 and blows it outta the water. Check the link in my sig for more info if you'd like. See you on AIM. 1

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aight voice kinda gritty...yea u got good presence nahmean flow i think could be sharper in certain spots breath control is aight could be better feelin your lines though nahmean hook is str8 where u from homie?...beat is pretty nasty...but yea back 2 your flow its good nahmean this drop was solid not bad props

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177716 -RTF plz man

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