aight this me and Cali battle, y'all seen cali's verse cuz i couldn't make it back home to post a verse so he automatically got 5-0.. but here's my verse also.. and FUCK all y'all who said i'm the worse female on this bitch.. but anywayz, leave feedback.. fa real no b/s on who y'all think won. leave a critique cuz i'm goin fa makin at least semi-finals in the next Royalty Tourney.. so Socrates leave feedback also..

CALI
Im wack? so why you went and tryed to recruit me?(link 1)
Now i gotta feel bad cuz i usually dont beat on my groupies(link 2)
Willa on vocation we needed a new slut guess who we chose?
What you thought it was skill?when ya audios like frozen rivers
...........NO FLOW!!
Yous a killa?....i agree how many horses died for ya hairstyle?
You got the same chance winning that rappers have...
....... at getting fair trails!!
You not nice you just got more dickriders then most porn sets
Made a thread you was (leaving 2 months ago..........)
....what the fuck you aint gone yet?!
You won once..........not with a single explained vote either
Think you still mad we kicked you outta A.I...
.......and you was the co-leader!!
'Lady' spits 'Fiya'?Nope! her flame is out watch as i relight her
Cuz this bitch only has one chance of winning...
....... if she hires a ghostwriter!!


~Lady Fiya~
U dragrace hygiene cuz u iron jeans in driveways, Q’s dame?
Not being profane, u got “D” fault wins 2 like ur user name…
…your parked riders in reverse to start and end on E*
He beefs wit Jury cuz Flow ONLY made you a-ttorney!
He can’t make it nowhere, so he changed his name to CALI
Pump orgasms in your arteries, give E the heart to beat me
Flattened Saucony’s, who goes to prison for stabbing “things”?!
He plays for Crème, look how early you put out the Black Queen!
I don’t mean Chess, post all over the board can’t find recess-
Shun, my crew’s for elevation, don’t think you need-less!
Stick lyrics to monorails, cuz not once you held solo tracks
So fuckin wack, S e n s e r spit too, ONLY u got bad feedback!
U won respect as an artist?! Can’t even throw a hard hit..
With a name this bitch stole from commercials for carpet!**


*his name starts and end on E.. (empire)
**carpet site--http://www.empirecarpet.com/commercials/


AIGHT NOW LEAVE FEED, i need to know what i need to work on peeps..

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uppin kiddos............................................ ........

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You have creative punches an metas, but in some places you word them wrong....

so i say you need ta work on the wordplay an structure side of things, but the punches an metas are certainly there, prolly the last person you wanted ta hear this from, but if you post in the LL Forum, then i'ma holla back, but you just need ta work on what i said, but thats just my opinnon

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^^much appreciated...

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OMG YOU USED THAT EMPIRE CARPET SHIT!!!!!!!!!! LMFAOLMFAOLMFAO....... u ARE the QUEEN for that one....... LOLOLOLOLOLOL, y didnt i think of that?!?1

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

^^i take that as you like...? but uhm, yea most people never heard of the empire commercial, they play it all the time in chicago..

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CALI would have won that battle anyway, he came real nice there.

Fiya, your punches were'nt really that hard hitting, like, in the bars, it seemed to be a lot of filler, cos your set up lines were kind of random, and the opener just didnt fit together at all.

I guess jsut work on using punches better in your text.

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i know, thats y most people wont get it but that shit is funny as hell.... i never laughed so hard in my life..... too bad only a few of us will get it.... juss thinkin about empy with that Old Carpet guy is crackin me up right now!

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

Too be honest, Empires verse was a little basic an boring, Empire is a nice emcee, i aint gonna deny that, but he's way too basic at times, he can just word his text together real good....

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Yo ma just uppin ya wordplay a little that all

I read both battles closely, an if i was gonna vote

it'd go like.........


Empires verse:
Dope wordplay, an connected his punches an the build up too the punches real good, but his creativity wasnt that nice at all....

like the frozen river line, i wasnt feeling that stuff, but i prefer humour in rhymes, an empire usually dosent bring humour, but his wordplay was nice as hell...
wasnt feeling his closer neither, it just wasnt creative or witty, he seems too lack wit an humour, there his main faults...

Fiya:
Ya flow was choppy, but your certainly more creative in your pounches, but the flow was just too choppy, an it ruined your punches, an the build up too some of your personals seemed forced, its like u just wanted people ta take note of the punches an forget the build ups are even there, ya feel me?

For creativity Fiya gets it, an on the humour an wit side of things, she gets it too, but because her structure an wordplay was choppy an lacked flow when your reading it, the humour an wit are pointless, you feel me girl?

Empire gets the win but only becuse his verse flowed, he had punches an a few okay personals, but his shit was much more easy too read, so i'd have ta say empire

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i ain't tryna disagree on feedback or whateva but not one of those lines are considered filler if i directed that shit towards him.. ALL oF THEM were pretty much personals and punches i threw metas time to time, but fillers? i got rid of those thing-a-mu-bobbers.. so yea, but thanx on the feed peeps.. i'm loving the honesty and Fuxjustaword it's all good.. lmao that had me laughin just watchin the video i was in tears when i first found the commercial on the net, i woulda never thought it would be a site for it.. lmao hee hee

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Dont woory bout the comments post more pics

Maybe Filler wasnt the correct word, but read the first bar again.

None of that goes together, there's like 3/4 seperate things, its too packed. Which makes it seem like filler.

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