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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Technical 2 28.57%
CeleriTy 5 71.43%
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Old 02-25-05, 11:12 AM   #16
Dirty Nigga
E-Style, Bitch.
 
IP: B1A5 868C

Voted For: Technical

Technical got this....

Much more creativity in his flow, an the wordplay an vocab hit alot harder, only line i wasnt feeling from ya whole verse is that portland one, even tho its true an they dont win shit, EVER lol, its still not a strong line in my opinnon, other theen that, the flow, structure, vocab an creativity was much harder

Celerity, wasnt at all feeling that opening line, an the AIM one was okay, lacked creativity, but it hit i guess

That slurpy line an serve lol, its all too basic from you, its all been said before but your just wording it in your own, way, thats mainly the reazon i am voting for tech, but still, it was an alright drop, vocab was too basic, an punches didnt really hit, but it was alright, just up your flow, vocab, an creativity, PEACE
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Old 02-25-05, 11:13 AM   #17
Dirty Nigga
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IP: ECB3 36A0

LOL, I didnt expect this battle ta be 2-2, but good luck ta y'all with this.......
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Old 02-25-05, 12:20 PM   #18
MaRVJay
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From: NyC,QUeENS EaRLy!
IP: 3240 794D

Voted For: Technical

lmaooooooo yo celeirty's last line was madd funny....but i have 2 say dat was it datz all he had and 1 personal...tech umm ur lines were kind of stretched but i think u were more consistant in dis battle ya punchlines were betta

opener-tech
structure-celer
punchlines-tech
creativity-tech
multis-nun from both
wordplay-nun
personals-celer
finisher-celer
enjoyed-basically most ya shit was a tie cuzz celerity took da personals but tech had da betta punches so i had da go with him

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Old 02-25-05, 12:37 PM   #19
Technical
23-7, 16 Knockouts
 
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From: -The Ring-
IP: 3240 794D

Coo...uppin for more vote...c'mon this is a tight ass battle..
 
Old 02-25-05, 02:37 PM   #20
Technical
23-7, 16 Knockouts
 
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IP: 0825 899A

uppin for more votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^.
 
Old 02-25-05, 02:56 PM   #21
RICH-Nytch
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Voted For: Technical

flow-tech
punches-tech
phrases-tech
basically he came harder wit more punches his verses was longer to get more out of this battle

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Old 02-25-05, 04:10 PM   #22
CeleriTy
*Im'a Hustla*
 
From: Portland
IP: E1D7 D0FC

LMAO this is hilarious.. 1.MarvJay1009 drops an unexplained vote... 2. RICH-Nytch who is marvjay's alias also drops a vote on the battle.. hmm... and his vote was also unexplained.. can i say DQ yes i think i can..
 
Old 02-25-05, 06:49 PM   #23
Technical
23-7, 16 Knockouts
 
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Alias? are you crazy, look at when they both joined lol, look at the post and win difference..u just mad u losin man..lighten up
 
Old 02-25-05, 08:02 PM   #24
Technical
23-7, 16 Knockouts
 
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C'mon people uppin for votes for the last time.....
 
Old 02-25-05, 09:51 PM   #25
CeleriTy
*Im'a Hustla*
 
From: Portland
IP: E1D7 D0FC

no no... its not that im mad im losing im mad ur getting DR's cause dawg.. it is an alias dumbass.. same IP's and they dont use AOL..
 
Old 02-25-05, 10:03 PM   #26
MaRVJay
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
 
From: NyC,QUeENS EaRLy!
IP: 7FC2 8CAC

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Originally Posted by CeleriTy
LMAO this is hilarious.. 1.MarvJay1009 drops an unexplained vote... 2. RICH-Nytch who is marvjay's alias also drops a vote on the battle.. hmm... and his vote was also unexplained.. can i say DQ yes i think i can..


lmaooooooooooooooo yo u a dickhead fam...y would i make an alias when i got like 22 wins under my name??....stupid dumb dick and i do have aol an dif u aint know they recycle ip's.....u gettin merked aint nobody fault but ur's
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Old 02-25-05, 10:29 PM   #27
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From: Florida
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Voted For: CeleriTy

CeleriTy
nobody'd know who ya were.. even if ya name was a disease
and u can IM for votes.. but your still not AIMING to please..
good opener, punch delivered
u can claim u spit fire.. but dawg you can trust you wont burn me..
nothing u could do would "serve me".. cuz i aint in the mood for slurpy's
pretty decent, punch was decent ehre
claiming you older than me.. dawg your just a ..fat liar
and its pretty sad.. when your own home can catch a flat tire..
nice closer, punch landed

Technical
Listen Celerity..Like Celebrities That Bite..U Losin Ur Dignity..
Look Geek..You'll Never "Beat" A "Pussy"..Like Men With 'Christian Virginity'..
good punch
In RV You're An Orphan..Who Relies On "The Councils" Dick Like Poor Kids*..
Ur Rhymes Are "Hot"? Well All (B)(l)(a)(z)(e)(r)(s) Dont Win..Just Line Portland..*
nah, this punch was weak here
Learn The Law Kid..Battling Me..Is Like Extortion..
Cuz U Make Decisions Without Visions..Like Mothers Than Go Along With Abortion
pretty decent closer, punch connected

Overall this was a good battle here, pretty close but
CeleriTy took this one though, had punches connecting
All thru the verse & the structure + flow was good here
And the vocab was decent here, Technical you had a good
Drop, except for that 1 punch that caused it there for you…

No hate…
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Old 02-25-05, 10:31 PM   #28
Anatomy
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Voted For: CeleriTy

Tech
you had some ight punches i really liked your opener bar but the rest was like whoa what is this it got all messed up like i didnt get it at all the multies n shit were tight ass but you make like these weird lines and mix it up and try and do punches that dont make sense try making less vocab in your lines cuz its like your forcing it to rhyme yo, fix that ish and it would be fire..

Cele
that ish was dope i liked the IM line and then the slupry line like whoa i couldnt think of that shit it might not be homouring but its a steaight up throw to the heart punchline yah know the rest was meh but i enjoyed reading that at first i was like iunno it was a hard choice but you were more creative stucture and flow was just alot better, pz
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Old 02-25-05, 10:38 PM   #29
Kirk
Peace, Love, Unity
 
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Voted For: CeleriTy

mhhmmm lemme break it down


Listen Celerity..Like Celebrities That Bite..U Losin Ur Dignity..
Look Geek..You'll Never "Beat" A "Pussy"..Like Men With 'Christian Virginity'..
^didn't rally understand it... 5/10
In RV You're An Orphan..Who Relies On "The Councils" Dick Like Poor Kids*..
Ur Rhymes Are "Hot"? Well All (B)(l)(a)(z)(e)(r)(s) Dont Win..Just Line Portland..*
^didn't udnerstand 3/10
Learn The Law Kid..Battling Me..Is Like Extortion..
Cuz U Make Decisions Without Visions..Like Mothers Than Go Along With Abortion..
^^didn't really make sense

you lost cause your shit didnt' make much sense, no hate


nobody'd know who ya were.. even if ya name was a disease
and u can IM for votes.. but your still not AIMING to please..
^8/10 ownage
u can claim u spit fire.. but dawg you can trust you wont burn me..
nothing u could do would "serve me".. cuz i aint in the mood for slurpy's
^ehhh 5/10
claiming you older than me.. dawg your just a ..fat liar
and its pretty sad.. when your own home can catch a flat tire..
^haha made me laugh 7/10

overall you just owned him, decent punches and good flow, sorry other dude
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