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02-24-05, 06:53 PM
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Same Routine
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Alarm clock sounds... Exhuasted, i hit the snooze... Feel like shit, regrettin that i hit the booze... Every day, the same thing, the same routine... Just mad that i ever have to wake from dreams... The only time in my life that i aint depressed... Untill i wake up and that feeling is laid to rest... Don't wanna but i know i gotta keep goin... Never quit, nope, you never see me slowin... But then again i keep moving at the same pace... Dont really see the reason i should gain haste... The day aint my time, i wanna get to night... And i know it solves no problems when i hit the pipe... A breath... Of sess... Will less... The stress... So i smoke the rest... Untill I aint depressed... Cause when I'm high, my mind just doesnt care... It's almost like I'm livin life, but i wasnt there... But 2 hours later, im back where i started... Cant talk to my friends, nope, their actin retarded... Break up with my bitch, Fuck, i hurl the phone... Then get prepared, to face this world alone... |
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02-24-05, 06:58 PM
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IP: 6CB8 12EC
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02-24-05, 09:14 PM
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he speaks....
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nice imagery in this one, flow was decent as well, keep it comin
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02-26-05, 06:00 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 6108 BCDB
Liking this piece, your writing style makes it so easy to read...
The only time in my life that i aint depressed... Untill i wake up and that feeling is laid to rest... ^loving these lines Concept is good, not hard to relate to. Kept vocab quite simple as usual but it doesn't affect the content in your drop. Emotion was nice, it had this melancholic vibe over it in my opinion. You had your flow on lock and imagery was there... Cause when I'm high, my mind just doesnt care... It's almost like I'm livin life, but i wasnt there... ^also feeling these for sure Enjoyed reading this piece! DQ
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02-27-05, 11:41 PM
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IP: 6CB8 12EC
Thanks alot girl... Kind of been taking a break, trying to get back in the mix.
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02-28-05, 06:30 PM
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IP: 6CB8 12EC
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02-28-05, 06:37 PM
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~Lyrical Nirvana~
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this was coo............i liked it.....it was good........
but it was kinda simple...but thats probably because it was a keystyle.....
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02-28-05, 06:43 PM
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*~Emericas Finest~*
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pretty decent stuff.. i felt where you were comin from real easy, kinda emotional... coulda had more but it was decent 7/10
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02-28-05, 06:48 PM
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Sam Dope
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^^Weerd...Good shit man...vocab was pretty basic, but it still got the message across...good shit...hit the link in my sig and return the favor...thanx...1 |
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03-01-05, 01:59 PM
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...OUTSTANDING...
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IP: 27F5 D59C
i enjoyed the work. it was very clear and was easy to follow and relate to. nice job.
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