Its only the first and third verse...so skip through some of the song when the first verse is done with to hear that last verse.....Wet Willy will be filling in the 2nd verse....constructive criticism please...thanks


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I peeped this last nite, but I will check it out again....................i always liked the beans song so lets hope you didnt destroy it....................vocals to loud..............almost annoying loud...........your flow is off, you stop and pause, don't kno if you mean to but your not flowing it out, its like your readin it, your not rapping it. not hating just stating what i hear...........when that beat plays, it is sick, your vox are just too loud..your 1st verse was ok, the hands of time line was ok, kind of played, but it fit the spot..............WOW, your 2nd verse comes in way to loud, just turn them down and you should b alright, might want to memorize it so you dont have to read it either. not a bad drop, but needs work, not hating on ya, do ya thang, but just work on your flow

hit me back http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179850

thanks for the feed......................

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damn homie, sry to say but the quality ain't looking nice at all you need to cop a better mic, or back away from the microphone when your spitting, shit got too much frequenzie's in it... I can kinda understand what you spitting and flow seems off abit dawg, but yo all I got to say is work on getting some better quality dawg and keep dropping

by the way thanks for checking out my track

peace

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yea man kinda messed up but it was cool keep droppin them like that

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josh

ill be lookin out for it

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josh

i thought it was nice... you got a good voice and it suited the song well... u could improve your quality but other than that its dope... 8/10

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thanks for the feed everyone.....keep it coming....

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^^^ thanks man.....keep em comin

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i liked the whole thing but the quality is real bad man, try workin that ish out ight