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6 - 10
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 02-27-05 at 12:55 PM

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Khaos_daRenegade has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 12:49 PM.

Lord.Wun has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 12:50 PM.

Fuck i got writers block today....

Nigga Face Facts..Even with a stockin Cap..you couldnt get Waves
Spittin Flames..and if your lucky, ill dig a hole next ya Grandpas' grave
Fuck It, i got writers block...Still, like Fiends..Im handin him "L's"..
You Know This kides a premature bitch, when he gets pissed on, By kelz
But Nigga Its Finished...the next 6 lines...Shit, I dont even need em..
Even his Motha Thinks Hes wack..check his battle stats if u dun believe em
im laughin right now...this dude accually think he talented....What!
If thats so then im god...Cause this nigga Khaos.....is straight Butt..
You see Kon scores more points..then the starting lineup in the allstar game
Gettin K'od..in 50 seconds subtract from 60,
.......................so enjoy your 10 seconds of fame..

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Lord. Wun

im tired of these new kids, so lord wun is bout to get murked...
after dis battle yo fuckin losing streak'll neva revert...
see sqirt, u got a funny flow wit no flow or delivery...
my punches connect to yo cranium and u'll be losin memory...
i think u kinda ill dawg..sike i dont mean to bubble u...
cuz in reality, sayin ya ABC's is the only way u'll get a W..
Kid run while ya can, since ya future's too bleek...
n' im'a call you 7 days, cuz everythin bout you'z weak...

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Voted For: Lord.Wun

see sqirt, u got a funny flow wit no flow or delivery...
my punches connect to yo cranium and u'll be losin memory...
..DOESNT REALLY RHYME, NO DISS
i think u kinda ill dawg..sike i dont mean to bubble u...
cuz in reality, sayin ya ABC's is the only way u'll get a W..
...FUNNY BUT I HEARD THAT B4
Kid run while ya can, since ya future's too bleek...
n' im'a call you 7 days, cuz everythin bout you'z weak
..NOW THAT IS DEFLLY PLAYED,
YO, U AIIGHT, BUT WHAT U NEED TO DO IS THINK B4 U POST A PUNCH, LIKE, HMMM, DOES DIS SOUND TOO BASIC? OR PLAYED...IF IT DOES, CHANCES R IT IS...

Nigga Face Facts..Even with a stockin Cap..you couldnt get Waves
Spittin Flames..and if your lucky, ill dig a hole next ya Grandpas' grave
NOT REALLY DIGGIN
Fuck It, i got writers block...Still, like Fiends..Im handin him "L's"..
You Know This kides a premature bitch, when he gets pissed on, By kelz
YOU TOOK A PLAYED CONCEPT AND MADE IT GOOD
But Nigga Its Finished...the next 6 lines...Shit, I dont even need em..
Even his Motha Thinks Hes wack..check his battle stats if u dun believe em
...FUNNY DIS, NOT REALLY A PUNCH MORE LIKE DISS
OVERALL LORD GOT THIS NO HATE, JUST ELEVATE,
return the favor
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checkin pollz........

Voted For: Lord.Wun

Aight, Noty a bad battle

Lord ya had some dope shit in there, killer was nice, ya had some dope wordplay too, feelin ya shit 4real real, nice shit

Khaos, ya verse lacked creativity dogg, ya needed ta have more original wordplay an ya vocab was a little off

Work on hittin punches an bein more creative in your lines

Return the fave in any of my battpes ya see floatin around

Peace

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uppin this battle...
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2-0 me...uppin to KO this sucka

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Lord. Wun

man lord wun yo verse was garbage as fuck uppin dis shit for some real votes

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LYRICALLY KILLIN BITCHES

Voted For: Lord.Wun

ight in my opinion this was an 1-sided battle

khoas- ight, ur structure was ok not the best..punches
lacked the effectiveness 2 hit hard..not many
personals..no multi's...overall ur rap scheme is
lame & needs improvement & elevation no hate

lord.wun- ight, ur structure was alot betta then khoas's..
great punches that hit hard..many personals
thru out..sum multi's..overall ur style of battlin'
& eva win in all catergories won u my vote
V/ Lord.Wun
make sure 2 return the favor

Voted For: Lord.Wun

aight Khaos-Ya shit was toooooo simple ya gotta elevate had me not laugihn or nuttin

LW- you had me laughin at points and ish you won merely cuz u had better punches connectin

both elevate tho

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Illest Warriors

Voted For: Lord.Wun



wun
got this 4sho...
Came sick with the multies an a few decent personals here n there, punches were nice too, overrall besides the way u structure your rhymes, there aint much i can fault, nice verse....9/10


khoas
l, ya structure was everywhere too
dont seperate bars like that man
gotta be more creative with the rhymes u choose ta use
Overall 6/10



no hate, just be more creative

wun got this for the overrall better verse

RTF In ANY of my battles ya see floatin around on front lines or whatever

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