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View Poll Results: CREATIVITIE vs. AssAsInS-eVolve!
AssAsInS-eVolve! 1 16.67%
Creativitie 5 83.33%
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Old 03-14-05, 07:20 AM   #1
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Creativitie vs AssAsInS-eVolve!

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i feel kinda bad battling him but i havent battled topical for a while so im kinda rusty

TOPIC=drugs


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Old 03-14-05, 08:36 AM   #2
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dun wrry bout it man. tis only practice so i dun give a fuk if i loose
 
Old 03-14-05, 08:42 AM   #3
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Old 03-16-05, 07:19 AM   #4
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In the stomach n in da heart is where da knives go
gotta watch ya back, dudes running from da five 0
Drug dealers coming back n fourth patrolling steets
holding heat to leave ya body limp, cold n weak
Shots to explode ya legs n have ya calfless
tis down to these bastards who like dudes wit no organs...heartless
Ready to bite fools, hanging at high-schools wit rifles
They wave gats to have ya layed flat when christ-calls
Too many cats are influenced...they all got thug fever
Hear a couple a tracks then they wanna be a drug-dealer...
These drugs n shit be giving off heat like heat-grills
All these imports of cocaine crushed wit E-pills
Its a lifestyle of smuggling, but you might make it rich
but its like a crackhead coz u gotta be prepared 2 take a hit...
Even if ya hate this shit...dudes got circumstances
n at da end of da day i guess thats their worst advantage...
Ima keep dropping topicals till u thugs are mad
I aint no preacher but listen 2 shady coz drug are bad
 
Old 03-17-05, 01:40 AM   #5
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aight well im bout to check in and start wrting my shit
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Old 03-17-05, 02:36 AM   #6
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Old 03-17-05, 02:38 AM   #7
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Dear god,

Why do they make those commercials promoting drugs as the truth?
Like the famous crack head said “take 1 hit, what do you got to loose”
Seriously can drugs honestly hurt you or bring you virtue and bliss?
Well don’t ask me I have never took the risk like all the other kids
I admit I was never rich or had shit but I would still pursue my life
When my mom was dope she said she could see my life threw her eyes
She said “just commit suicide, you don’t have the choice of do or die
It was the drugs talking so everything she said I knew where lies
Still I was dumb as they come, the 1st time I tried weed I was stunned
They saw the smoke go into my lungs they came but I was too high to run
I was only 13 and already my life was heavy and just about over
While I was sitting in my sell I knew damn well I would always be sober
So from that day on I turned to god, he was the only prescription
I pray that you listen, so that one day you to can shake that addiction

This was done fast, just something real quick, its all true yo, word is bond
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Old 03-17-05, 07:03 AM   #8
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ok uppin this..............................................
 
Old 03-18-05, 02:32 AM   #9
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Old 03-18-05, 09:01 AM   #10
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uppin............................................. ....cmon i'll RTF
 
Old 03-18-05, 09:52 AM   #11
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Voted For: AssAsInS-eVolve!

Ima give it to evolves coz I was feeling his verse more...U both had tite verse dnt get me wrong, i just favour his personally. I felt it flowed a bit better as well. return da favour man. peace
 
Old 03-21-05, 04:15 AM   #12
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uppin............................................. ................................................
 
Old 03-21-05, 07:14 AM   #13
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Voted For: Creativitie

Creativitie took this one with more imagation, better wordplay, rhyming, and better structure. I was feelin yo verse more. Yo drop was flawless to me. I think you came out stronger, hit tha topic well, and stayed consistent thruout tha whole verse. thats why i gave u da vote.
assasin-yo verse was wack to me. I felt like you mad this a one sided battle. I think yo verse was way too simple minded, and I think you couldve came a lil bit harder and more creative. Yo structure was a lil off in most places. Yo wordplay was just ight to me, but i still dont think you took this one.
overall-creatiitie for me, w/ better wordplay, and imagition, and all that other shit i said.

v/creativitie
 
Old 03-21-05, 07:16 AM   #14
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sad ^^^this kid voted for his self. look at the IP's. yo verse was THAT wack, and u didnt even explain it. RV is sad.
 
Old 03-21-05, 02:20 PM   #15
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checkin tha polls........you got him on this one. simple
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