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View Poll Results: R stylez
R stylez 1 16.67%
Chowie Chow 5 83.33%
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Old 04-07-05, 03:36 PM   #1
Chowie Chow
New to RV
 
From: Canada
Chowie Chow vs R stylez

IP: 2B0D D205

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Old 04-07-05, 03:36 PM   #2
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Old 04-07-05, 06:43 PM   #3
Chowie Chow
New to RV
 
From: Canada
IP: 2B0D D205

waiting for you to accept..........................................
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Old 04-07-05, 08:34 PM   #4
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R Stylez has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-07-05 08:34 PM.
 
Old 04-07-05, 09:08 PM   #5
R Stylez
New to RV
 
From: Tha Mitten
IP: 7B17 E968

okay...dis should be easy based on ya otha battles...peep

mr. chow i dont think u really wanna battle me do u?
i jus signed up two days ago and i got mo wins than u*

man u a waste of my time fo'real, go grab ya fake steel
and shoot yaself in tha head cuz dis next loss gone make u wanna kill**

"chowie chow"? whats tha deal wit tha name homeboy?
sound like a farm raised cow, u got a mad disese boy?***

ya otha battles prove dat u as good as ya 0-3 record
battlin me only gone get u lower than summer sale leather****
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i was lookin at ya battles cuz u have no profile...look:

*=he got a lossin streak...im 1-0 and he 0-3, i jus signed up, he been here since last month

**=he a net thug, from lookin at his lyrics...dis battle will make him kill, start wit yaself, lmao

***="chowie chow" sounds like a cow name...sum cows got da mad disese

****=he gotta be weak witta a 0-3 record...in da summer, leather has real low prices, his self-esteem is gone be lower than dat
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where ya verse at homie?...im waitin on u now...cmon
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Old 04-07-05, 10:43 PM   #6
Chowie Chow
New to RV
 
From: Canada
IP: 2B0D D205

Man this cat is wack, all he is going to get is an huge electrical shock.
Hes like a boy hitting puberty, startin to wack off in his athletic socks.

His structure is totally weak, messy as hell, its all over the place.
Worst then a senior citizen trying to find a close parking space.

Your 1-0, thinking your hot shit, but still you got nothing to show.
Homie didn't even drop a verse, just gave you a penalty free throw.

If you were to enter "R-stylez" as a dictionary entry.
It says, "you still need to grow because you soo elementary"

This rap verse shit ain't going to work for you, maybe you could be come a priest.
Theres some things in common, acne only cumes on your face when you hit your 13th.

After this verse, your going to be embarrassed, I'll silence you like Mr.Bean.
The only way you'll survive in life is if you keep putting quarters in that slot machine.
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Old 04-07-05, 11:06 PM   #7
Chowie Chow
New to RV
 
From: Canada
IP: 2B0D D205

just to let you all know, on the 10th line i didn't spell "cumes" wrong...... you'll get it...
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Old 04-08-05, 05:17 PM   #8
Germ
in your system
 
From: Adanac
IP: 9E2F CDE8

Voted For: Chowie Chow

blah....both need to work on actual punches, get some personals....word, giving this to chowie though, because he attempted more punches, kept it consistent, althought, half were whack, (but half had potential) r styles, you weren't even dissing him, and your first bar, nice attempt, but it didnt rhyme yo
man u a waste of my time fo'real, go grab ya fake steel
and shoot yaself in tha head cuz dis next loss gone make u wanna kill
^ that didnt diss him at all, and it didnt rhyme,,,,,,word, so i give this to chowie, for having whack punches that landed....r styles, you were just whack......no hate.....

v/chowie chow
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Old 04-08-05, 10:28 PM   #9
the kid 523
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Voted For: R Stylez

yo close battle

i thought stylez had better stronger punches
no hate to either of u
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Old 04-08-05, 11:14 PM   #10
R Stylez
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From: Tha Mitten
IP: 0DCC B527

no hate taken kesse...i had nothin but his old battles to work wit...he has no good sig or profile...and da vote for me will be deleted...not a real vote...so dis battle is really 0-1...and good verse chow...iight punches...but i like mines betta...lmfao
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Old 04-08-05, 11:52 PM   #11
Germ
in your system
 
From: Adanac
IP: 9E2F CDE8

^ yeh, and dont take my vote wronly either.....i tend to come off a little harsh because there is alot of people out there who just vote and dont even really explain.....like, obviously you both are new to this, and you need some direction, so i tend to vote a little negatively but at the same time, i do point out the areas of good quality, and areas of improvement, because you aren't going to elevate if you keep thinking you are good, i learned that.....but if both of you keep trying, you know, get some good creative shit and work on structures and wordplay, you both could get the hang of it....word.......and i'll up this for you
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Old 04-09-05, 12:15 AM   #12
DoContinue
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IP: 8430 B90D

Voted For: Chowie Chow

honestly, i think chowie chow won this battle
his bars werent exactly grade A but his single personal (which wasnt really personal) and little punches won this battle for him. nothing from either verse really stood out much... the elementary line was pretty straight just because of the use of the word elementary. I think chows punches were a tad bit harder hitting than Stylez's punches. Stylez just looked up profile stuff to write personals. they were true personals but not very effective. overall this one goes to Chow
V/ Chow...

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184736
 
Old 04-09-05, 03:59 AM   #13
Cocaine
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IP: 258C A279

Voted For: Chowie Chow

Man this cat is wack, all he is going to get is an huge electrical shock.
Hes like a boy hitting puberty, startin to wack off in his athletic socks.
Your 1-0, thinking your hot shit, but still you got nothing to show.
Homie didn't even drop a verse, just gave you a penalty free throw.

vs

Nothing

R Stylez...you need to elevate more, those punches there
weren't even connecting, the structure was okay & th flow
was okay too, but them punches & personas need to land
...so Double C took this one for coming less wack though
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Old 04-09-05, 03:11 PM   #14
R Stylez
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From: Tha Mitten
IP: 765F D224

iight den...its cool...and thanx kesse, i feel u fam...uppin
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Old 04-09-05, 04:55 PM   #15
NewKid
Home Of Philly
 
IP: 9145 1B7B

Voted For: Chowie Chow

da fukk? on sum real shit both of dis was wakk no nice punches all dis shit was basic as hell

chowie chow=punches was basic nigga had sum ok personals i aint gonna lie he did have sum wordplay strukture was off dont stretch out ya lines cuz nigga had a ok openor it followed the whole way ok but ended weak keep dat shit on da same pace da whole verse den u can kill deez niggaz

r stylez=dont get excited ya shit was pure wakk u talked about ya self like dis was a freestyle dem punches was korny as shit you did have sum ok personals jus like da otha bull ya shit lakked almost da whole verse well da whole verse lol keep ya shit gangsta yo make sum ill punches and personals elivate a whole lot den start battlin ova

chowie chow took dis
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