in the life of times through life of rhymes/
my soul vibe on lines and sign of crimes/
i can find the grime sublime the prime/
remind the blind we intertwine our kind/
and find a nitch spit our riches grind em quick/
flip these snitch bitches, lie in ditch/
lime and witches brew stew the crew massive/
thought you knew i drew and you grew passive/
my words stay attractive the mental stay active/
stickin these verses to the head keep you captive/
i predict in water like john the baptise/
my coming inflict pain like atoms gone reactive/
blessed are those who blessin them hoes/
and stressin those foes into guessin and woes/
the lesson untold unfold into digression/
watch how daily words served for digestion/
i can let mcees walk fifteen paces/
shoot twice miss and split clean faces/
let the dawn of graces leave traces of my dopeness/
my lyrical rages invade and remake the hopeless/
erradicate the copeless into uncanny submission/
unfanny these bitches and hand me a biscuit/


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u got good wordplay son, but ur creativity is BLAH...some of da lines don't make much sense its like u just flowin without thought...but it was tight in its own way..return da favor in my thread "...Da C-Kwence..." aight son