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SexyChick1338 | 0 | 0% | |
Elementality | 5 | 100.00% | |
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05-02-05, 06:38 PM | #13 | |
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Voted For: Elementality
SexyChix- Too many shit lines, cliche, not enough originality, no structure...you had some decent concepts, but instead of making them original, you just used played set-up and punches that were really too basic to be good. Work on the structure and how to clean up your punches. OK line: U know that true, whats with the Name???, Theres about 6 ppl on this site with that, your all the same!!! Elementality- OK, seems like you actually comprehended the fact that this was a battle and not Freestyling on Sesame Street...There was an actual structure to your shit and some ok punches, plus personals. All you need to win this one... Best line: Your only 14 years old kid, quit workn the streets Shes so young she still wakes up to wet bed sheets RTF, I need some votes if you can..
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