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Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 05-10-05 at 08:59 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Re~Verb has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-10-05 08:31 AM.

datopprospect has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-10-05 08:32 AM.

On this microphone i can't be beat,
i treat re-verb like his signature and 'hand' him defeat/
Cuz i'm sick on the mic and and nice when we go textual,
And if this dude hates my knife swings across his face both ways like a bisexual/
I dun know what dude u heard about,
Cuz when them things come out, this dude's face will 'change' just like what in your couch/
Niggas say they ain't feelin me cuz i scare them have they face white like chalk,
Dun get mad cuz i had your girl and pulled out my 'Lexington Steele' and made her 'booty talk'/
This nigga dun have the heart, how you make it to the top of the charts?,/
i'll run up on you in the dark, with the sumthin sharp, put it to where you think you smart, and then kill a different member of your family every week like Kenny on Southpark/


put it to where you think you smart=Brain

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This guy wanted to elevate, ok he thought, nows my chance
Told to attempt slant rhymes, so he addopted a backward stance
Wanted to dance, but he lacks stability like a flatpacked shelf
Was gonna try get personal, but his rhymes speak for themself
Theirs no need to hit him hard, hell..hes started crumbling already
Told him just to spit whenever, because he`ll never be ready
Already ya merked, u cnt spit gangsta,mommys boy ya too good
Type to mess wit car engines, in an attept to be "in tha hood"
Drag ya name through the mud, but its that long itll take me 4eva
The sayings wrong, coz this experience wnt bring us "closer 2getha"**


**i mean closer 2 getha as in our battle records

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re~verb vs legion (topical)
re~verb vs shard (text)

This guy wanted to elevate, ok he thought, nows my chance
Told to attempt slant rhymes, so he addopted a backward stance
Wanted to dance, but he lacks stability like a flatpacked shelf
Was gonna try get personal, but his rhymes speak for themself
Theirs no need to hit him hard, hell..hes started crumbling already
Told him just to spit whenever, because he`ll never be ready
Already ya merked, u cnt spit gangsta,mommys boy ya too good
Type to mess wit car engines, in an attept to be "in tha hood"
Drag ya name through the mud, but its that long itll take me 4eva
The sayings wrong, coz this experience wnt bring us "closer 2getha"**


**i mean closer 2 getha as in our battle records

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re~verb vs legion (topical)
re~verb vs shard (text)

shit........
that was close..didnt realize id not posted in the correct box until 30seconds left.lol....

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re~verb vs legion (topical)
re~verb vs shard (text)

Voted For: Re~Verb

da verb winz diz battle for da overral better verse da punchlinez wuz sick da personalz hit hard an da creativity of his bars wuz just much more better so verb getz mih vote on diz battle

On my verse, i jus noticed a line a messed up, on the couch line it is supposed 2 be

I dun know what dude u heard about, Cuz when them things come out, this dude's face will 'change' just like whats in your couch/

Voted For: Re~Verb

one word...E-A-S-Y

well damn...no need to explain but i got to...here we go...

verb:
This guy wanted to elevate, ok he thought, nows my chance
Told to attempt slant rhymes, so he addopted a backward stance
...lolz...iight opener

Wanted to dance, but he lacks stability like a flatpacked shelf
Was gonna try get personal, but his rhymes speak for themself
...nice one right here

Theirs no need to hit him hard, hell..hes started crumbling already
Told him just to spit whenever, because he`ll never be ready
...had me rollin...good

Already ya merked, u cnt spit gangsta,mommys boy ya too good
Type to mess wit car engines, in an attept to be "in tha hood"
...OMG!!!...perfect, perfect, perfect...dat won da battle right there

Drag ya name through the mud, but its that long itll take me 4eva
The sayings wrong, coz this experience wnt bring us "closer 2getha"**
...cool closer, could have been betta

*8/10

spect:
On this microphone i can't be beat,
i treat re-verb like his signature and 'hand' him defeat/
...not really

Cuz i'm sick on the mic and and nice when we go textual,
And if this dude hates my knife swings across his face both ways like a bisexual/
...quit sayin "mic"...u "typed" dis homie

I dun know what dude u heard about,
Cuz when them things come out, this dude's face will 'change' just like what in your couch/
...heard dat before

Niggas say they ain't feelin me cuz i scare them have they face white like chalk,
Dun get mad cuz i had your girl and pulled out my 'Lexington Steele' and made her 'booty talk'/
...no dats iight...only a porn head would get it

This nigga dun have the heart, how you make it to the top of the charts?,/
i'll run up on you in the dark, with the sumthin sharp, put it to where you think you smart, and then kill a different member of your family every week like Kenny on Southpark/
...whoa, too damn long...wtf?

*5/10

structure: verb
flow: verb
punches: VERB
multis: verb
vocab: VERB

overall:
verb, u really didnt have to come hard at all...spect, yo shit was all over tha place and no punch landed...one sided battle famz...

v=re~verb

return tha fava when 8 drop his verse...link in sig

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^^aight thas coo............
uppin....................

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re~verb vs legion (topical)
re~verb vs shard (text)

Voted For: datopprospect

Dun get mad cuz i had your girl and pulled out my 'Lexington Steele' and made her 'booty talk'/

yup i watch alot of porn so i was laughing at that line.
nice shit original too.

reverb came slick tho but ur punches were as effective/
ur flow was better tho. if u need this vote further explained message me.

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