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Old 05-14-05, 02:47 AM   #1
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Old 05-14-05, 11:33 AM   #2
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Old 05-14-05, 07:32 PM   #3
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alright i'm peepin this right now....

The Production of course was hot...

Flow-7.5/10
Lyrics-7.5/10
Voice-8/10

Overall this was a good track...you gotta come hard tho man...i know u can take these kids...
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Old 05-14-05, 09:51 PM   #4
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Old 05-15-05, 03:20 AM   #5
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holy shit....... lol, this is lloyd banks shit for real man.... it was decent, kinda random punches and shit for the most part, which is aight, but i like more personals and shit..... but damn u even got the same rhyme scheme as banks like:

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ohh man, this shit is too funny right now

..... but yea that diss was pretty decent, just come wit more personals next time... and it sounds like u mumble alil bit.... just alil bit... lmao, like banks sounds

sorry if this Banks comparison shit is pissin u off but for real, either ur tryin too hard to be like him, or its just one big ass coincidence
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Old 05-15-05, 12:04 PM   #6
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this my beat right here yamean....aight delivery was str8 on this shit right here...yea he do remind me to much like banks...flow wasn't bad ...got a few good lines in here yamean...this wasn't the most hard hitting diss...but for like a warning shots kinda diss it wasn't bad...i wanna see where this beef goes
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Old 05-15-05, 02:54 PM   #7
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Overall this was a good track...you gotta come hard tho man...i know u can take these kids...

^ who tha fuck is zeke??? lol n has he hearda omen? nah i dont think so or he wouldnt have posted this. lol yea i already left feed in ya other thread that got closed for this diss...
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Old 05-15-05, 09:44 PM   #8
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naw...honestly i like the attention i get because i look like him but i ain't no about the rhyme scheme...i listen to em but i don't study shit like that...lol...yea alot of peeps probably thought this was the best i could do...i'm holding off for the the other rounds...my sc is getting mad hits from this shit...thanks for the feedback....uppin for more feed
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Old 05-15-05, 09:53 PM   #9
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lol^ i know what u sayin about the sc hits, i think ive gotten at least 50 or more hits a day for the DEBIT DISS alone, i been gettin mad hits for it lol, probly tha most played track on my site for this month! ha ha ah, so im glad we did this lil round for round
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Old 05-15-05, 10:41 PM   #10
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yea...i was like wow...lol...anyways uppin for more feed peeps
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Old 05-18-05, 12:21 AM   #11
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Old 05-18-05, 10:58 AM   #12
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flow is mega pritty man...
production is nice as hell,do sound like banks but...hey if thats u..do you,sounds good 4 real
"half bitch like mermaids" rofl <--pimp man,origonal also thats what im talkin bout man

but..u cut offa bar or 2 on the flow tip,

real decent man..for real..the train derailin line was nice to

maby get a lil deeper w wordplay...not that u dont do your thing but i try to give a lil good and bad to everyone !

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Old 05-18-05, 05:37 PM   #13
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thanks for the feed...uppin for more
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