this was done for a league on another site...just some basic shit...

"vs Blackanese aka Jazzy Jeff"
HI FI: http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=2426764&q=Hi
LO FI: http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=2426764&q=Lo
MP3: http://www.soundclick.com/util/Down....cfm?ID=2426764
Music Page: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/blaccbattlesmusic.htm

His Pic:


Lyrics
Verse 1
Allow me to reintroduce myself, my name is B-L-A to the Dub C/
I neva eva seen dreds on a chinese/
im ripping this man twice like a siamese/
hes half of me, so im choppin off "Blacks Knees"/(Blackanese)
weak rhymes, guarantee you wont go far/
lookin like a fag version of Nimrod/
weak delivery soft when he spits bars/
running with viagra and he still cant go hard/
first drop been wack every since/
only jazzy jeff I know is the one with Fresh Prince/
name biter, thats played like a street fighter/
spits decent lines yea, cuz he got a ghostwriter/
high school geek you need to hit the books son/
His pic screams "I Love Pokemon"/
heres some advice, drop from the league/
cuz jazz been played since BB King.

Verse 2
Yo im back again/
he got a nose like stimpy and a face like ren/
black gets a lot of replies on RM/(rapmusic)
then again most of the posts are from him/
the man cant see me cause his lights are dim/
someone explain why hes trynna look like nim(rod)/
it’s the bitch in you, your way to feminine/
confused about your race like mufuckin eminem/
to tell you the truth, nobody knows/
your just a fag inside, in yo pic it shows/
goin to star wars conventions cause he think its cool/
thats the influence of a mostly white school/
chill man, imma cut you some slack/
lying to these people, we all know you aint black/
this is to easy just a quick breeze/
only ahead when "blacks" on his "knees"(blackanese)

Responded to...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190612
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190815
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190717
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190472

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Returning feedback.... Listening while typing....

Intro is some weird shit, lol @ you rippin on his shit in the beginning, iight lets give a listen....

ROFL @ opening, yea this shit is better than I expected, you got a solid delivery, lyrics are fairly decent, a couple bars were real solid, lol @ opening couple bars in second verse... I think lyrical content got better in the second verse for a little while... lol I really liked the adlibs throughout it, wordplay for your ass... lol yea this was a decent listen, keep droppin em, appreciate the feedback.1

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Rofl, that beggining was funny as shit, had me cracking up! I like you voice, it's dope. The flow in this was pertty solid, I liked it a lot, the lyrics were pretty good, some things stood out more then others. Nice job man, I really liked this, still laughing! (Return the feed when you can to my thread "I'm Emcee Remix")

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i'll get at it in a few...up...

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