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Old 05-15-05, 12:19 PM   #1
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Sakim Aerias vs Triple_N

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Battles up Monday - Check In by Wednesday - Drop by Friday - Votes by Sunday

No line limit and the battler with most votes by Sunday night is the winner. If this is a topical battle, write a topical and not a poetic drop and the same is vice a versa.

All Battlers must vote on 4 other battles and leave their voting links in their battle thread. Battles voted on may be from either poetry or topical battles.

Extensions must be asked for by Thursday night by pming any of the mods (Acuity, Drama Queen & Elementality). No extensions will be given 4 if asked 4 on Friday night. Extensions are only given till Sunday night at the most.

Every battler must nominate (not their own) one topical and poetry battle for pieces of the week, in the main forum . People with pieces of the week shall have their drops stickied and placed in the Pieces Of Inspiration sub forum


Topic: Drowning in Ink
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Old 05-15-05, 04:41 PM   #2
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Yeah I'm here.............


Checking in................
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mystery Is a Freak!!

ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*
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Old 05-16-05, 11:08 AM   #3
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Checkin in this
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice
Because at the end of the day, you get what you give
So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is
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Old 05-20-05, 03:59 PM   #4
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YO errrrrrrrrr, i need an extension till tomorrow, saturday.
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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*
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Old 05-21-05, 05:10 AM   #5
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Old 05-21-05, 02:54 PM   #6
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The cold air lurks around me as I stand in position
With Cold chapped lips and the bruises are not fiction
Bad images flows in my brain, like I was equip with the sea
I felt like was a mirror, knowing on the outside, I bleed
I gasped, As I saw the images un blur and clear…..a fist
With hard knuckles pounding on me, it’s quick I cant resist
I felt like I was trapped in a box, no way out, I took the pain
Every pound, took the wind out of me, tears leak with it man
When its over, like pain attach with glue, it’ll never go away
But tonight will he his last, and time for me to be……..free
As I stood hiding behind the window curtains, as my body
………and my dress soaked with the deadliest color …bleeds


As I opened the door I felt the empty presence reeked around me
My eye sockets went both left and right, rage crept “where is she?”
One step, I felt this awareness in me, telling myself “something not right”
Second step, As flicked the lights on, like an open soul, no one still in sight
Saw this “flat” presence from a tree, written in ink, my hands went hard
It reads “I left” popping veins from my neck, rage, took the letter and discard
With my hands looking like a fist, and rage pumps in me, I put my head down
For thou I wasn’t aware of the presence no more, knowing that I’m alone now
With one movement, I didn’t breathe, with one movement, I didn’t hear
My body hit the table black ink leaks on me, with darkness ending my life
……………………………….............. .................No more I see light clear


As I walked in front of the door, surprise there’s no sirens waling
My blood leaks with the black ink, no more I will be………aching
Put my hand on the door knob, nervousness roll in me without thinking
My blood leaks with the black ink, no more I will be………aching
One turn from the knob, open, finally with a glimpse of light, I’m free
My blood leaks with the black ink no forever more………..I breathe
As I turned around, see the corpse body, I opened my mouth and said
……………………………….............. .......................Bye honey


1 had rage, the other rage for revenge

Now think who saying "BYE HONEY" The husband or the wife?

G00d luck guessing it.
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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*
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Old 05-23-05, 06:23 AM   #7
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v/ Artistica for showing
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Old 05-23-05, 08:16 AM   #8
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yo that was a nice verse such a shame the other person no-showed......you should've battled me lol.......
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Old 05-23-05, 11:59 AM   #9
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Closed due to opponent no-showing
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