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05-19-05, 04:37 PM
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**the council**
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IP: CC70 BA36
lol.........how you go get me?
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05-19-05, 04:38 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 2E66 280B
I dont know shit....................Your aint that sexy for me to come get. lol.
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05-19-05, 04:39 PM
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**the council**
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IP: CC70 BA36
lol what you mean by that?
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05-19-05, 04:40 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 2E66 280B
........................................nnnnnnnnno thing...
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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05-19-05, 06:23 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: B80A A22F
Aight Check It...
Your Flow Through The Piece Is Off Due To Extensive Lines and Your Lack of Ability To Sumarize Your Thoughts. Your Emotion and Imagery Is There...They're Nice...but Without Good Vocabulary and Nice Sentence Structure..You'll Always Be An Average Topical Head. I Did Enjoy Reading This, and The End Was Mos Def A Good Way To End This Piece of Literature. Good Creativity. Keep It Up Man. ~R~ |
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05-20-05, 04:01 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 0556 A71D
^^ Thanx for the feed................Uppin.........
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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05-22-05, 03:02 PM
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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP: 96D0 2E48
Nice piece, like the others said, great rhyme, imagery, and emotion, really felt it. Good drop man, keep it up.
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 i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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05-23-05, 11:39 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 23D5 2B69
nice drop man...good emotion and nice word play...the end of this was crazy man...shit really took a twist but very good drop...pce 1
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