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confidential 5 71.43%
b-gurl 2 28.57%
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Old 05-16-05, 08:25 AM   #16
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yo this was a aiight battle yo....
b-gurl - i liked your verse, your punches were very good your flow stayed on point the whole time, you had a nice opener and closer... your vocab was overall pretty good i liked your structure alot better than confidential.. overall nice verse 7/10

confidential - your verse was a bit more simple, your vvocab needs to be improved and ur flow was pretty good... work a bit more on ur openers and closers but overall you had a pretty good bunch of punches but girl hit harder and i just liked her verse more...

overall/ b-gurl... no hate how i saw it peace...
 
Old 05-16-05, 10:45 AM   #17
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^^^ WHAT??? are u serious??? can u see a punch in there??

plez show me where??

fucking dick ryders....
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Old 05-16-05, 11:00 AM   #18
Lyriclesolja
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Voted For: confidential

Yo here it is......
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Con-nice punches.... but try to make them hit harder next time you almost lost this......using comedy in ur punches will get you a win almost every time keep that up.....Try using Multies and adding some Metas....it will help you elevate alot more.....your best punch---
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if we was locked in a studio i would walk off in hanf-cuff for verbal-rape
cuz ya best spit comes after u swallow....plus i got it on tape.....-----some funnie shit.....oh and by the way i gave her that money.....Holla
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B-Gurl---i liked that you used one rhymin word all the way through...and the multies..but you seriously lost this BAD.......keep on trying wit this battle shit.....elevating easy if you keep at it.......try using metas and personals next time!!!.
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ur best...confidential's here to show his 'potential'
its consequential* that i fuck up his credentials
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good battle yall but i goota give this one to Con........V/Con
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Old 05-21-05, 11:59 AM   #19
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upp'in to end this battle already.........................
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Old 05-24-05, 12:39 PM   #20
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Voted For: confidential

ok battle...

here it goes


confidential's here to show his 'potential'
its consequential* that i fuck up his credentials

not really a punch....

he didnt realise that wen i spit-its torrential**
like a Rain storm,'pac-a-mac', its essential

played but still ok

2 beat this bitch,im so hot -im 'quintessential'***
didnt take much thot, hes 'in-consequential'****

diss but not a punch

callin evry1 out, actin big and 'presidential!'
hate 2 mention boi, but ur rhymes r 'non influential'

ok closer but ...blah

verse was ok, i seen better punches from you in the cypher, you came week here, have a lot more potential....you had the better vocab but in comparison to his verse....na


u a female emcee so actually i admire-when
u rhyme, cuz slang gotta be hard to understand when u live in ireland....

yeah nice hit.

b-gurl i aint want to do this, but getting fuck was part of the plan
but u aint worth the money in the bank..just the money on hand *HA*

nice punch

if we was locked in a studio i would walk off in hanf-cuff for verbal-rape
cuz ya best spit comes after u swallow....plus i got it on tape

yeh another nice punch

u said u'r crib was nice but now I can tell that u fibbed though
If u don't live in a trailor then why r there tail lights in ur window? *HA*

meh...ok

Sike that aint ur pad, but u aint lettin the truth come out either
Cuz u just snapped a pic on the job where u work as a house cleaner

ok personal...

N fuck ya spit, cuz its the crabs on ya pussy that got me scared
diminished in strength, i'll leave u verbally impaired BITCH....

ok closer


overall con gets this due to better punches.. no hate, just the way i saw it..

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Old 05-24-05, 12:47 PM   #21
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Voted For: confidential

Punches-Con...had 1 nice punch in ya verse son...try ta add more,i see the potential

Multis-Bgurl...u had these down packed,dem big words was killen me at first...gladly u added an explanation...

Vocab-Bgurl...again thanks fa adden the explanations of the words u used...

Personals-Con...basically this is what got u my vote...all dem personals were funny...ta me personals and punches is what get the win

Opener-Con..."u a female emcee so actually i admire-when
u rhyme, cuz slang gotta be hard to understand when u live in ireland...." LmaOO funny shit...need i say more

Closer-Tie...netha one was hard hitten...so i'd have ta say you both tied on this...

V/Con...due to the personals

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