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Voted For: REDZONE

Easy win for redzone the multies pretty decent goin troughout the verse your structure was readable and your metas made sense eventhough you talked about alot of herb shit your flow was way better than khaos's garbage asss verse.

Khaos i dont know what you were thinkin your whole verse was garbage it looks like you were pullin random words out off a bucket and pasted them in the verse pure garbage and look at your structure learn t use the enter key and stop with the herb talk talkin about dykes and cocks unngh NO thats so poserish whatever you got owned

v REDZONE

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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

i voted for Khaoz...

punches: khaoz

Redzone attempted punches but his werent strong enough, and some of em made no sense..fareal

personals: khaoz

Redzone was concentratin on throwin in punches and wordplay...i barely seen a personal from him

creativeness: both

Both of u niggas were creative, i think redzone put more thought into his verse, but i think both of u had it so its a tie

wordplay: redzone

Redzone's was full of wordplay, not sayin khaoz's shit wasnt but red had wordplay throughout his verse so he took this

multiz: noone

self-explanatory

flow: redzone

redzones shit flowed more because of tha wordplay

opener=khaoz
middle=khaoz
closer=redzone

hit up one of my battles...wun

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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

GOOD:

Flow - Both
Structure - Redzone
Punchlines - Both
vocab - Khaos
Wordplay - Khaos
Nameplay - Both

BAD:

forced Rhymes - Both (I saw form both sum forced rhymes)
Forced Multis - nope
Non Sence - nah

CREATIVITY

Theme Battle - nope
Creative Punches - Redzone
creative multi's - khaos

PERSONALS:
Khaos came harder with the personals, I didn't saw any good from Redzone, but both came hard hittin with punches

OPENING/CLOSING:

Opening: Redzone
Closing: Redzone

COMMENT:
Both battles wur good, but khaoz came harder with punches...... tight battle

V/ Khaos

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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

This was a pretty close battle:
Khaoz:
Yo Disses Are Short Changed, For U Fellow MC'Z O'z Are Bankrupt//
Guess Datz Why U In Da REDZONE, Never On Da Come'Up//
...... this opener was decent, but nuthin special
Stick Da Emotion ThumbUp, Cyberly Givin U Propps//
Fake Recognize Fake Aye?? Yo Flowz Immitatin Milli Vanilli Dropps//
...... lmao, this line made me laugh, pretty good, altho setup is alil eh
Pull Out All Da Stoppz, Because Datz Where It Stoppz, You'd Have Too Steal My Mic//
Your Never A Step Ahead, Lyke Cheating In A Walk Race On A Byke//
ehhh ok simile and shit here, but the punch u tried to bring with it was worded alil off to make it effective
Your Da Illest Yeah? Booo! Hahaa SYKE//
Diz Pussy Getz Fucked Lyke A Set Of Twin Dykez//
....this was pretty weak... stay away from gay and lesbian lines....
I Really Dunt Wanna Fight, Mainly Becuz Ahm NICE//
It Wuldnt Be Fair On U, Even Tho Erry Hooker Has HIS Price//
..... ehhh it was ok multis but nuthin else was done very well
Ur Nuthin Mo Than Vice City, Rappin Shitty An Getting Played By Kidz//
U Culdnt Even Sell Yo Shitz On Ebay With Free Bidz//
....ehh, wording was off again, ok concept but it made for a weak punch....
Try Watching Porno Vidz, Releaze A Little Tension//
We All Need Elevation, But U Need A Fucking Suspension///
.... haha, this line made me laugh also, i unno y, but decent bar
Im Da Newest Kid On Da Block, So Diz Why He Loves Me//
Got Me Confuzed Wit Da Boy Band An He Sayz Ahm Lovely//
.... lol, ok wordplay, the end of ur bar coulda used lil help so we could comprehend it better, but ok bar
Ur Pretty Gay, Attrracting Cock Like A Sausage Fest///
If Life Wuz A Metaphour Diz Whore Is Happy Being Second Best
...... ehh not that good of a closer

overal u had decent punches, only a couple personals, but they were aight........ some multis in there to string it along better, however, i dont like ur structure... stay away from the slashes and all the CAPS and ull be fine.... .also work on ur wording alil bit to make for more effective punches, along with more creative concepts

Redzone:
battle me, where ya vest at, mah flow'll leave ya chest wet...
i dont know how u did all those multies and than didnt rhyme it that well at the end... no punch really, just multies
I'm tha best yet, can't test that, you like a stripper get messed at...
mah THEORY will leave you KHAOZ, worst than black plague...
tha gat spray, ya back lay, off tha shots tha mac made...
..... only multies really, and that gangsta shit isnt very well accepted on this site
Red'll destroy ya cuz, then preceed defense ta finish off ya family...
exploit and expose ya wit mah 6 sense like stutterin stanley...
... lmao @ stutterin stanley...... but not very hard hittin dissin him wise.. sayin u have a 6th sense is kinda SG
you jus shit, only way you buss shit is nuts you buss quick...
can't touch this, mah flow MC Hammer ya guts bitch...
....... ive heard this same Hammer shit since 2000, So NO! not good
unbelievable how RV accept homo's, that try ta flow fa promo's...
no mo' of you faggot, mah punchline get cha strike 3 like Nomo...
ok bar..... nice multis but thats about it
you slow mode, even special olympics couldn't figure out...
so call me a REDneck wit a noose I'm hangin this nigger out...
..... i liked this bar, best one of ur verse to me, just try and be more creative like this
with out a doubt Red leave ya floods exitin out cha pierced wounds...
it's automatic that cha don't wanna put cha life in a situation wit a fierce dude...
...... ur just sayin shit in this bar, no real punches or creativity, along with metas
Imma gift wit tha flow, KT ya style is ugly and cursed...
before attemptin ta flow a lil advice GO HOME AND STUDY MAH VERSE...
ehhh this wasnt very creative and not a very hard hittin closer

ok, Khaos gets my vote for more consistency, creativity, and metas and similes.......... REDZONE had one nice bar and the rest was like SG or gangsta type shit....... one line, and multies do not win battles.... u need more balance like Khaos... khaos also had multies, but they were more useful and helped the verse out better.....

V/Khaos

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