Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

i'll stomp your face on the ground - so you'll be feeling like dirt
plus u getting smacked w/ a globe - so u just left in a world of hurt
da second line is coo but d first wasnt

u got no "welcome to rv" post - but Rv must of been asleep
& ur loss to me is like King of the Hill - just another damn repeat
1st line was solkid but d second is uncreative

There's only one word to describe you - and that word is Gay
Cuz once Khaoz entered the battle - he tripped over the doorway
that is just whack, d first line was horrible and d second wasnt much better

Please kid just give it up - cuz in this battle - I'm a stalker
But once Khaoz took me to school - I pushed his ass in the locker
didnt relly rhyme that well but it was cool

I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself
& you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself
weak closer niga

d verse was average alot of uncreative rhymes in d verse an da bars wasnt effective


Thought U Wuz Gonna Be A Challenge, So I Had 2 Accept
U Callin Out Newbies? Cuz Ya Flowz Sunk Now Ya Ship Wrecked
not a good opener


HeavyWeight Champ? Bitch Aint Rocky, Or Even A ''Contender''
EZ Win? Nup, Fake MC Culdnt ''Pull Da Stringz'' If I Handed Him A Fender
very good personal/punchline it was d highlight of d battle

Bend-Ya Barz, Cuz They Aint Straight, Like Yo Persona
Ur Copyrighted By Khaos, Bcuz U Know I Just Owned-Ya
could of been alot better


Now I'll Disown-Ya, Put U Up For Adoption, Losingz Ya Only Option
I Heard Yo Name Wuz ''Cherry-Red'' Cuz Da ''Pussy'' Stays ''Poppin''
that is alot bettr really good punchline and metaphour here

Flowz Is Played Out, Pleaze Dont ''Bust-a-Rhyme'' Just ''Stay-Out''
Yo Verses Aint Goin 2 Plan, Lyke U Just Lost The ''Lay-Out''
pretty decent closer

Khaoz Theorys verse was d better one his punchlines was more creative and original and d wordplay was good. skriptz had t many uncreative uneffective rhymes an his punchlines were off good battl doh homeys

Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

Skriptz:

One of the better drops from you. Punches were decent, but really could've hit him harder. I liked your locker line and the tripping over the doorway line tho. Funny shit. Personals were spread around, you had a few, but they weren't hitting when they needed to. Had a couple of played punches. Work on your creativity and consistency.

KhAoZ ThEoRy:

Very nice verse. I was kind of surprised. Punches hit him where it hurt, personals were pretty decent, and you had some nice meta's in there. Take out the slashes and shit tho, because that is herbish. We do not need those to be able to find your flow. Both verses flowed fine, but KhAoZ gets the vote for his consistency and an overall better verse.

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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy


Thought U Wuz Gonna Be A Challenge, So I Had 2 Accept
U Callin Out Newbies? Cuz Ya Flowz Sunk Now Ya Ship Wrecked
ehh, not that great of an opener

HeavyWeight Champ? Bitch Aint Rocky, Or Even A ''Contender''
EZ Win? Nup, Fake MC Culdnt ''Pull Da Stringz'' If I Handed Him A Fender
haha, ididnt git ti ttill u explained it, but not bad

Bend-Ya Barz, Cuz They Aint Straight, Like Yo Persona
Ur Copyrighted By Khaos, Bcuz U Know I Just Owned-Ya
ha, that wuz aight

Now I'll Disown-Ya, Put U Up For Adoption, Losingz Ya Only Option
I Heard Yo Name Wuz ''Cherry-Red'' Cuz Da ''Pussy'' Stays ''Poppin''
lol, i like it

Flowz Is Played Out, Pleaze Dont ''Bust-a-Rhyme'' Just ''Stay-Out''
Yo Verses Aint Goin 2 Plan, Lyke U Just Lost The ''Lay-Out''
ok finisher, not bad


i'll stomp your face on the ground - so you'll be feeling like dirt
plus u getting smacked w/ a globe - so u just left in a world of hurt
ehh, i c wut u were tryna say, but it just didnt sound right 2 me

u got no "welcome to rv" post - but Rv must of been asleep
& ur loss to me is like King of the Hill - just another damn repeat
same az tha last bar

There's only one word to describe you - and that word is Gay
Cuz once Khaoz entered the battle - he tripped over the doorway
ehhh, not that good, lol

Please kid just give it up - cuz in this battle - I'm a stalker
But once Khaoz took me to school - I pushed his ass in the locker
lol, man u really gottta werk on ya punches

I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself
& you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself

ay, sik wit it, no offense or nuthin, but u really gotta werk on ya punches. khaoz, this wuzznt bad, i can c u gittin retardedly good i fu werk on it, no hate sik, payce

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I vote Khaoz, even if we got beef he did better. His rhymes were tight, youres were kl but kinda bored me,

Bend-Ya Barz, Cuz They Aint Straight, Like Yo Persona
Ur Copyrighted By Khaos, Bcuz U Know I Just Owned-Ya
Now I'll Disown-Ya, Put U Up For Adoption, Losingz Ya Only Option
I Heard Yo Name Wuz ''Cherry-Red'' Cuz Da ''Pussy'' Stays ''Poppin''

Best bit

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i'll stomp your face on the ground - so you'll be feeling like dirt
plus u getting smacked w/ a globe - so u just left in a world of hurt
nuthin 2 special, okay 1st line tho

u got no "welcome to rv" post - but Rv must of been asleep
& ur loss to me is like King of the Hill - just another damn repeat
better punch

There's only one word to describe you - and that word is Gay
Cuz once Khaoz entered the battle - he tripped over the doorway
nope, concept of the first punch was he's ''gay'' an that dont cut it in a battle


Please kid just give it up - cuz in this battle - I'm a stalker
But once Khaoz took me to school - I pushed his ass in the locker
better, better, im really really really feelin that, niiiiiiiiiiiice

I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself
& you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself
weak closer, could of been much much harder

overall: 22/50
expected much better from u skriptz, i could care less about this new guys verse but he really did see you off in the battle, better rhymes skriptz, better punches an alot more creative an orifginal with his disses, better all round verse from here, what happend skriptz? damn boy

vote/khaoz, overall the more enjoyable an harder hitting verse, i'm dissapointed in u skriptz

yall need to take a look at my battle with E.C an drop a vote, aight skriptz? you too khaoz drop a vote or ima fuck yall baby mommas an get this here vote removed

peace the fuck out niggas.

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