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Check in by: 05-28-05 at 12:36 PM

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Saskilla has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-28-05 12:08 PM.

When I crush this fuck, GKillaz will be resting in the ocean.
N I don't know what's worse, ya verse, or the fact that ya posting.
Watch my punches unfold, grab ya attention n the magic disperse.
Because you know ya gonna say I'm fulla shit, AFTER I ate ya verse.
I'll squash this chump, my heavy bar's ain't neede to kill this bitch.
The way I shut this fucking dummy up, you'd think I was a ventriloquist.
I'm fuming I'll clamp down on this fool, fuck what ya story is.
Because all ya avy did, was make B.I.G. a little less notorius.

If ya don't get the punches, then fuck outta this thread. & for the last line check his avy.

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GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-28-05 12:25 PM.

Saskilla's fast to use a filla in all of his whack spits...
You explain to much shit and your flow is whack as it gets...
Im takin' a shit on this fool like he was the damn toilet...
Only time you spits are sick, is when you punches spoil it...
Treat this like a royal spit, im the king your just a jester...
Your lyrics are not goin' to pass, like failin' a semester...
Blowin' up your bars like uncle fester, you cant fight back...
I'd KO his ass right now but I think this bitch might rat...

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Upping, GKillaz got deaded yo.
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Voted For: GKillaz05

V/GKillaz05.......this was an ight battle nothin to special....G gets my vote cause he came wit good solid punchs that were creative not played an good structure he came wit.....Saskilla....had an ight verse but really had no punchs that caught my eye some played ur structre was a little stretched but u did have a good personal closer....but not enough to win this.....No hate.....RETURN THE FAOVR(or i will get this vote removed)..http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=189169
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Opener=G
Closer=G
Structure=G
Punchs=G
multi's=Tie none really
personals=G
Wordplay=G
vocab=G
Overall=GKillaz05

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Voted For: GKillaz05

me, GK got this

>When I crush this fuck, GKillaz will be resting in the ocean.
N I don't know what's worse, ya verse, or the fact that ya posting.
set-up was whack...filler...not a bad punch 5/10
>Watch my punches unfold, grab ya attention n the magic disperse.
Because you know ya gonna say I'm fulla shit, AFTER I ate ya verse.
not bad, wording was off a little 6/10
>I'll squash this chump, my heavy bar's ain't neede to kill this bitch.
The way I shut this fucking dummy up, you'd think I was a ventriloquist.
lol, not bad, set up was stupid though, self-glor 6/10
>I'm fuming I'll clamp down on this fool, fuck what ya story is.
Because all ya avy did, was make B.I.G. a little less notorius.
meh, too basic, didn't really fit your verse 5/10

overall: 22/40......meh, not bad, i thought some of your set-ups coulda been better, and wordplay was really hurting the effectiveness of your punches, you coulda easily taken this replacin opener or closer with a better concept, keep up.


>Saskilla's fast to use a filla in all of his whack spits...
You explain to much shit and your flow is whack as it gets...
meh, basic, 4/10
>Im takin' a shit on this fool like he was the damn toilet...
Only time you spits are sick, is when you punches spoil it...
lol, nice punch 8/10
>Treat this like a royal spit, im the king your just a jester...
Your lyrics are not goin' to pass, like failin' a semester...
not bad 6/10
>Blowin' up your bars like uncle fester, you cant fight back...
I'd KO his ass right now but I think this bitch might rat...
meh, 5/10

overall: 23/40...like i said, this shit coulda gone either way, you had a really weak opener, but you had that nice punch in the middle, made me laugh, haha........plus you were more consistent, better structure, flow was bang on.....decent wordplay...you just edged this one out in my books

v/gkillas

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Voted For: GKillaz05

Yo Ok, Diz Wuznt All Dat, Both Culd Use Work On Yo Wordplay

Punchez Definately Go 2 GKillaz, He Had Sum Iight Punz & Personalz In There, SAS, U Need'a Up Yo Wordplayin Game Alot, ,Most Ya Stuff Wuz 2 Basic & u Dint Focus Enuff On Yo Oppenent, GKillaz Verse Wuz Da Much More Enjoyable/Witty & humouress Verse 2 Read

Holla@Da Link Below Plz, Drop A Vote, Da Battle Iz Whack, It Wuz Mah First Battle, But All Da Mo Reazon 2 Get It Closed!
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=191943

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Voted For: GKillaz05

GKILLZ
1. Nice opener.. little basic but hits nice 8/10
2. Not a bad punch.. toilet line was good... little played but good 8/10
3. not bad.. still basic.. work on your complexity.. 7/10
4. nice closer.. no really hard punch.. but it'll do.. 7/10

Sask
1. nice opener... little played though... 8/10
2. alright punch... worked with the wp a little.. 7/10
3. last line was good.. but the first line.. straight filler.. 6/10
4. not feelin it.. + filler again with the self glorification 5/10

overal Killaz got this. with better punches.. and overall less filler....
both of you work on ur shit though.. it was a good battle..

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