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View Poll Results: Kein Witz Vs Mr. Hahn
Kein Witz 5 100.00%
Mr. Hahn 0 0%
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Old 05-24-05, 05:57 PM   #16
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Uppin'............................................
 
Old 06-02-05, 04:18 PM   #17
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1-0. Uppin', let's go. >< ........................
 
Old 06-02-05, 09:06 PM   #18
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Didn't like that topic. <<

Anyone, still looking for votes here.
 
Old 06-11-05, 02:01 PM   #19
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Old 06-11-05, 10:51 PM   #20
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this is what gives RV a bad name... nobody fucking votes...
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Old 06-21-05, 07:26 PM   #21
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Voted For: Kein Witz

Green Eggs And Ham............................................... .

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
 
Old 06-21-05, 08:18 PM   #22
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o_O Why do you keep voting for me without explaining it? Not helping when it's DQed.
 
Old 06-23-05, 05:12 AM   #23
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This was feedback posted for Mr. Hahn

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pollllzzzz........................................ ...
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Old 06-29-05, 01:57 PM   #24
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Voted For: Kein Witz

Flow-Kein.......Mr. Hahn had his verse structured bettter but Kein Witz placed his rhyming words better.

Emotion-Kein....both had emotion,but Kein's was incredible.His statements were just far more ulterior.

Multis-Kein again.....Bassically all the words he rhymed had more than one syllable.Mr Hahn had some multiple syllable rhmying too.. but Kein's was just better

Vocab-Kein....like all the other caterogories,both of you did good in this.But it was like...almost every line in Kein's verse had a word that would make a elemantary kid scratch his head.

Originality-Mr. Hahn....The idea behind Kein's verse was simple.Take just one look at the topic name and Kein's idea would be the first to come to mind.

Well....tis was a good battle.Both of you had good verses.To me this how topicals should be.Dun make topicals with like 30 lines.Nobody wanna read a novel.Keep it short but ulterior.
And Kein...I voted in a lot a ur battles...and this is ur best verse I seen.U actually stayed on topic this time.

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Old 07-05-05, 11:31 AM   #25
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Old 07-07-05, 01:22 PM   #26
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Voted For: Kein Witz

Damn @ Kein's verse. That was some nice shit dude, Crazy how someone can write shit like that. Very harmonic or something, lol. Nice way that you put it together as well. The first two lines were put together very well as well as the last two lines.. Mr. Hahn, You had length on him but your verse just didn't match up with his. Kein, you had nice imagery homeslice. Hahn you're verse was good and all but it just wasn't as good as Keins. Nice imagery as well though... But my vote goes to Kein due to the story told in such a short amount of lines and amazing imagery.
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Old 07-07-05, 04:25 PM   #27
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Old 07-07-05, 04:37 PM   #28
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Voted For: Kein Witz

ok nice battle here both did good but i felt keins better just way betta at the vocab sectiona nd flow kein work a just a little more on emotions but u got this MH u did good but not that good man need to work on ur flow and structure and a just more on vocab some words were good but still needs more so in my opinion my v/ goes to kein witz
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