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Tekneek 5 100.00%
{D.N.A.} 0 0%
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Old 06-14-05, 01:52 PM   #1
{D.N.A.}
Flyweight
 
From: REPPIN VA HARD
Tekneek vs {D.N.A.}

IP: 4447 7C43

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Old 06-14-05, 01:53 PM   #2
System
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IP: 4447 7C43

{D.N.A.} has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-14-05 01:53 PM.
 
Old 06-14-05, 01:57 PM   #3
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IP: B1A5 868C

Tekneek has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-14-05 01:57 PM.
 
Old 06-14-05, 02:10 PM   #4
YouKay
[COLOR=Yellow][B]Tha People's Champ[/B][/COLOR]
 
From: England
IP: B1A5 868C

I’ll make your ass-salute-me, battling me is a loss Absolutely
When you accepted, you might as well of said “Stab-n-shoot-me”
You lost like bad-navigation, couldn’t get help with collaboration
You must have mad-frustration, cuz the only thing you cum with is m.asturbation
I’m bolder-n-keen, rip your shoulder-n-spleen
I told-ya-I’m-mean, but you’re just a stupid wolverine*
I’ll pop you like an ollie-ya’ll,* prolly-bawl
Cuz you blow like a trolley-call,* so I’ll serve you like a volleyball
You’re scared so I drop-first, since you’ve started you got-worse
Pussy, I’ll make your t.wat-burst, cook you like bratwurst
Throw-yer-best and you’re still below-the-rest
I’ll blow-yer-chest, and like they say: “You know-the-rest”*

*Trolley-call: Air blows from the whistle
*Ollie-ya’ll: When you ollie on a skateboard, they say you ‘pop’ it
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Old 06-14-05, 02:17 PM   #5
{D.N.A.}
Flyweight
 
From: REPPIN VA HARD
IP: 4447 7C43

ayo

Im not gone Need a STRATEGY just to Beat thiz Chump, Cuz my Tekneek iz just a mere Squeeze of tha Pump/
Thiz Egotistical Kid Needz Every Extra Kick just to think hiz Dick iz Growin up just a lil Bit/(Tekneek)play on ya name
So before theze punchez hit, Grab ya lip and hold on to ya Jawbone/
Im sendin you total Chaos and Anarchy til every law gone/
I have no Choice but to Kill a kid, ill drill ya head, look through ya neck and watch how ya Liver Spread/
I wanted a Real Match, someone should have sent me a Lighter and Cigarrettes/
But now I gotta BURN YA like the Smoke inside of thiz Niggaz Chest/


damn i need to keep rappin to get back to my old level but on you dude...Good Luck to ya
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Old 06-15-05, 10:08 AM   #6
YouKay
[COLOR=Yellow][B]Tha People's Champ[/B][/COLOR]
 
From: England
IP: ECB3 36A0

Where's All The Voters At...........
.........this A Tight Battle So Dont Sleep On It.
 
Old 06-15-05, 11:22 AM   #7
§ick§eed
.. §eed Will §onn You ..
 
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From: .. New York §ity ..
IP: 1A5C 42B3

Voted For: Tekneek

punches....tekneek
personals...D.N.A.
multiz...tekneek
wordpay...tekneek
creativity...tekneek
text flow...none
structure...none
humor...none
enjoyment...tekneek

D.N.A. needs serious help but overall Tekneek took it cuz of

-multiz
-wordplay
-punches

next time try some personals


return dat fav also kid...my battle wit souljah
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Old 06-15-05, 01:22 PM   #8
YouKay
[COLOR=Yellow][B]Tha People's Champ[/B][/COLOR]
 
From: England
IP: ECB3 36A0

thx dog...decent vote.......................
uppin
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Old 06-15-05, 05:44 PM   #9
{D.N.A.}
Flyweight
 
From: REPPIN VA HARD
IP: 4447 7C43

uppidy up up...
yall dont sleep on diz!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 06-17-05, 11:34 AM   #10
YouKay
[COLOR=Yellow][B]Tha People's Champ[/B][/COLOR]
 
From: England
IP: ECB3 36A0

lets get these votes in
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Old 06-17-05, 12:54 PM   #11
YouKay
[COLOR=Yellow][B]Tha People's Champ[/B][/COLOR]
 
From: England
IP: ECB3 36A0

bump.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .. .................................................. .....
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Old 06-17-05, 03:11 PM   #12
YouKay
[COLOR=Yellow][B]Tha People's Champ[/B][/COLOR]
 
From: England
IP: ECB3 36A0

bump.............................................. ...........
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Old 06-18-05, 07:45 AM   #13
YouKay
[COLOR=Yellow][B]Tha People's Champ[/B][/COLOR]
 
From: England
IP: ECB3 36A0

bump.............................................. ...
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Old 06-18-05, 01:55 PM   #14
YouKay
[COLOR=Yellow][B]Tha People's Champ[/B][/COLOR]
 
From: England
IP: ECB3 36A0

uppin this.............................................. ..................
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Old 06-18-05, 04:54 PM   #15
Wicked One
Ill Nigga Alert.
 
From: Harrisburg, PA
IP: 0825 899A

Voted For: Tekneek

Tekneek- your verse was nice n all....had some funny but yet some nice punches...your structure was ahh blah...i mean should be fixed up a little ...maybe take away * < them n all...but overall 7.9/10...you got this battle because you had a better verse but yet better punches because they connected well & just hit better...

DNA- your verse was aight too....but your punches....were a little weak at some places...they didnt really connect and all...your strcuture was aight but should use a little fixin upper...but overall 5.9/10...because your punches were just weaker n all...

*Hit The Battle In My Sig PLEASE...Or I Will get this vote removed...* Thanks...
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