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"I can feel it in the air........
I can hear it in your voice....


Its something wrong here, something goin on here
I know something's up cuz i can feel it (in the air) <<girl sings
i can feel em surroundin me, and hounding me
blockin me, got 2 glocks where my phone is 'pose 2 be
guess thats da thug in me...even this way around my boys
dey sayin "damn man you changed, cuz i can...(hear it in ur voice)"<girl sings
i'm over whelmed by this deep incredible force
i'm pass grown guess its time for me 2 make a choice
hear my voice, i ain't never sounded like this
got me scared 2 walk down da hall just 2 take a piss
fuck a schitz, its just my intuition that i feel like this
niggas call me crazy but i just don't care
say all u want but nigga i can feel dis shit in the air

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"I can feel it in the air........
I can hear it in your voice....

Niggas out 2 get me, i can feel that shit its tru
stopped walkin wit 1 chip and stepped up to 2
time 2 move, cuz i can feel 'em hot on my tracks
ain't got no real niggas dat will watch my back
hold my stacks, well back i'm out on da streets
only one i do trust is my tru friend i call heat
only use it 2 cease a mothafuckin heart beat
creep (pause), keep my paste up, neva slow up
shit, a nigga still runnin after da feds showed up
keepin da hustlin up...gotta check my self- conscience
people crazy these days, they'll do anything but da obvious
i know dey want me but i ain't goin no where
let my bullets do da talkin let em spit (in the air)<< girl sings

Chorus]
"I can feel it in the air........
I can hear it in your voice....

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My angel

"My heart my soul...my love my blood"

nice shit ma........feelin da stucture n use of imagery........flow was good also........7/10

keep at it ma, stay up

dats whats up...uppin....give me ya feedback....thanks

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My angel

"My heart my soul...my love my blood"

good drop....iunno wether i like your version better or mine...peep it if u want 2 i'll drop tha link or somethin but anyway ya structure was a real strong point but it fell off in just a few places.....i really like tha way u blended tha girl that sings in with ya verses 2......stay up & rtf....1

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thanx... yeah post it if u can....dats whats up!

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My angel

"My heart my soul...my love my blood"

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186432
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186367
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186055

..3 of my latest solo links

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yo....this was okay..not really feelin it too much..no hate...the hook was really really basic along with the rhymes alot didnt really flow good together and really basic..but keep it up u be fettin better...no beef, just not feelin it..but keep it up anywayz

no beef takin papi... you got yo on say and opinion... thats wat i asked for so aint no beef fa reall thanks for stoppin by

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My angel

"My heart my soul...my love my blood"

iight ma i gota give mad props...that was real...keep it up and lets sho waht femcees bout. 7/10

^^^^
damn you went and got my old shit lol ty ma

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My angel

"My heart my soul...my love my blood"

Thank You.............

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My angel

"My heart my soul...my love my blood"